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Perception


Perception

Mountain as seen in childhood
Appears hill in the old age
Things appear smaller and smaller
As we turn page upon page

Perceived in the childhood
A towering personality
When grown up to adulthood
Appears as dwarf entity

A wide street seen in childhood
Reduces to sheer path like passage
Genuine shrinking
Sees the old age

Parity to gravity
Everything subject to relativity
Our journey to maturity
Sees varied perceptive reality
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Subhashchandra Adhav 6 months ago
The poem also underlines the importance of perception i
Subhashchandra Adhav 6 months ago
Perception changes as we grow old !!
Perception, by Subhashchandra Adhav 4.8 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 11 reviews.
Sandra Tapia 6 months ago
Your perception of aging is on point. Love the flow of languge.
Sandra Tapia 6 months ago
*Language* Nasty Auto-Correct 
Subhashchandra Adhav 6 months ago
Thanks ---We can't help technical flaw !!
Subhashchandra Adhav 6 months ago
Many thanks so kindly Sandra for your nice and precise  review .
Pankaj Kanaujia 6 months ago
The great one ! A new ,a different , meaninful.maturity is the name of confidence,understanding and experience.like it.
Subhashchandra Adhav 6 months ago
Thanks so kindly for your excellent review!
Subhashchandra Adhav 6 months ago
Thanks indeed for your nice appreciation. 
Jawahar Gupta 6 months ago
NICE
Perception
Subhash
tIME DOES NOT REMAIN THE SAME
EVERCHANGING
Subhashchandra Adhav 6 months ago
Thanks so kindly for your excellent review!
Subhashchandra Adhav 6 months ago
Thanks indeed for your nice appreciation!
Shib Shankar 6 months ago
Nice one 
Subhashchandra Adhav 6 months ago
Thanks so kindly for your excellent review. 
Subhashchandra Adhav 6 months ago
Thanks indeed for your nice appreciation!
Tom Kennedy 6 months ago
Perception to me is the greatest intellectual gift. Congratulations Subhash chandra.........Tom Kennedy
Subhashchandra Adhav 6 months ago
Many thanks so kindly Tom for your excellent review.
Subhashchandra Adhav 6 months ago
Thanks indeed for your nice appreciation.
Subhashchandra Adhav 6 months ago
Perception varies as we grow old !!
Subhashchandra Adhav 6 months ago
Thank you all my readers to love my poem!-
Subhashchandra Adhav 6 months ago
Wish you a happy read!
Subhashchandra Adhav 6 months ago
Happy Today!!
Subhashchandra Adhav 6 months ago
I so appreciate heartfelt and kind support of my readers!
Subhashchandra Adhav 6 months ago
I appreciate the support of my readers. 
Stella W 6 months ago
Well Penned Adhav.. Insightful Poetry!!!
Subhashchandra Adhav 6 months ago
Great many thanks so kindly Stella for your insightful review.----
Subhashchandra Adhav 6 months ago
So kind of you.
Subhashchandra Adhav 6 months ago
Have a great and blissful day  !!!
Subhashchandra Adhav 6 months ago
I so appreciate your valuable comments!!!
Subhashchandra Adhav 6 months ago
Have a splendid time !
Iveri Maisuradze 6 months ago
Perception
Subhashchandra Adhav 6 months ago
Thanks so kindly for your excellent review. 
Subhashchandra Adhav 6 months ago
Thanks indeed fòr your nice appreciation. 
Sonja Carnes 6 months ago
Bless you my poet, friend! This is an excellent poem Thank You Subhashchandra!
Subhashchandra Adhav 6 months ago
Thanks so kindly for your excellent review 

Subhashchandra Adhav 6 months ago
Thanks indeed for your nice appreciation 

Subhashchandra Adhav 6 months ago
Blessing be with you 

Subhashchandra Adhav 6 months ago
Stay blessed.!
Subhashchandra Adhav 6 months ago
I so appreciate your heartfelt and kind words. 
Jun Jacob 6 months ago
The observation is so accurate. It is as if "Why have I not thought of this before". Congratulations You are on target!
Hoolio Somboble 6 months ago
I think that the rhyme scheme was well placed, and the exposition of idea was spot-on! Docking a few points for possible grammatical restructuring,but well done.
Subhashchandra Adhav 6 months ago
Thanks so kindly for your excellent review. 
Subhashchandra Adhav 6 months ago
Thanks indeed for your nice appreciation!
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