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Wanted to part

In the fabric of relationship the weave got loosened
Wanted to mend but the heart didn't let it

Feelings got deeply hurt
For patching it needed the feeling of forbearance

But humiliation pierced like a thorn
Hope to flower again was a question

Mind and intellect ended in a tiff
Mind oriented towards the values of forgiveness but intellect questioned dignity

Dilemma rocked and decision got balked
The love and affection smiled and the thought to part changed to a understanding path

Like the sun and moon
Lits the light the lamp of love razes the diiferences
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Wanted to part, by Shobha Raman 5 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 4 reviews.
Sonja Carnes 6 months ago
Beautifully expressed and Written!
Shobha Raman 6 months ago
Lit of love glowed and tuned my mind
Andreas Simic 6 months ago
The cerebral versus the emotional in a tug of war in a relationship is nothing new but the way you wrote it is refreshing. Good job.  
Trippi Sanders 6 months ago
Keep the creation and attaining mastery goin
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