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A Radiant Fair of Fireflies

A Radiant Fair of Fireflies

The sun headed towards day’s rest
The dark pal slowly came over forest
The dusk deepened as descended the dark pal
It heralded night’s intense dark fall

When the light completely faded away
Started their soon fluctuating display
The green bright sparkles came into play
Spectacular was their wavering flying array

Charming were flickers in the darkness
Stunning was their brightness
It was sheer delight to see sharp pr*cks of light
A thousand tiny specks adorning the night

The night bewildered to have short bursts of radiance
Such a brilliant glow lighted up the ambience
The green light twinkling and its winking off and on
Thousand fireflies came in and their dance here on

Flashing and gleaming they flew here and there
The whole clime was enjoying a radiant fair
The night witnessed the awesome luminous dance
With lustrous thought, She went into deep trance!
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A Radiant Fair of Fireflies, by Subhashchandra Adhav 5 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 9 reviews.
Jawahar Gupta 11 days ago
Superb
Magnificent narration
Charming were flickers in the darkness 
Stunning was their brightness 
Loving your whole well-crafted poem,    DEEP  TRANCE, Subhash
~~~Jawahar Gupta ~~~
Subhashchandra Adhav 10 days ago
Many thanks so kindly for your superb review.
Subhashchandra Adhav 10 days ago
I so appreciate your complimentary words.
Subhashchandra Adhav 10 days ago
Thanks indeed for your nice appreciation.
D'Etta Cooper-Durden 11 days ago
Beautiful rhyme and play on words.  You used the right words too for fireflies....charming, flashing...gleaming..brilliant...Great job.
Subhashchandra Adhav 11 days ago
Thanks a million for your magnificent review.
Subhashchandra Adhav 10 days ago
Thanks indeed for your nice appreciation.!!
Lora 11 days ago
I love the flow of your poem, great imagery... Made me smile!!!
Subhashchandra Adhav 11 days ago
Thanks generous for your excellent review.
Subhashchandra Adhav 10 days ago
Thanks indeed for your nice appreciation.
Ronell Warren Alman 11 days ago
Solid writing here.
Subhashchandra Adhav 10 days ago
Thanks so kindly Ronell for your excellent review..
Subhashchandra Adhav 10 days ago
Thanks indeed for your nice appreciation.
darren de leon 11 days ago
nice
Subhashchandra Adhav 10 days ago
Thank you so much darren for your nice review.
Subhashchandra Adhav 10 days ago
Tyhanks indeed for your nice appreciation.
Subhashchandra Adhav 11 days ago
The whole clime was enjoying a radiant fair----!!1
Subhashchandra Adhav 10 days ago
Thank you all my readers to love my poem.
Subhashchandra Adhav 10 days ago
Wish you a happy read.
Subhashchandra Adhav 10 days ago
Happy Today !!!
Sonja Carnes 11 days ago
Interesting and intriguing work here, Subhashchandra! 
AMAZING imagery and poetic expression is exquisite
You are Masterful and creative! Thank you! Blessings.
Subhashchandra Adhav 10 days ago
Many thanks Sonja for your superlative review.
Subhashchandra Adhav 10 days ago
I so appreciate your marvelous input !
Subhashchandra Adhav 10 days ago
Thanks indeed for your nice appreciation.
Subhashchandra Adhav 10 days ago
Blessing be upon you !
Subhashchandra Adhav 10 days ago
Stay blessed !
Sweet Honey Dove 10 days ago
so much light
in night they dance
forever in trance
you may get chance !

i loved this poem subhash 
it is one of your best !! :)

~LOVE~
Subhashchandra Adhav 10 days ago
Thanks so kindly SHD for your  lovely and wonderful review !
Subhashchandra Adhav 10 days ago
I'm humbled by your praise and compliments !!
Subhashchandra Adhav 10 days ago
Thanks indeed for your valuable comments !!
Subhashchandra Adhav 9 days ago
Thanks so kindly for your encouraging words as always!
Stella W 10 days ago

Love this poem like your charming signals poetry!!!

Radiance in your writing Adhav!!!

Love it!!

Stella W 10 days ago

Have a blissful day!!... I know your work...

Your humble heart... With your amazing

talent.... Such an honor to be part of

your work.... Adhav!!!!

Subhashchandra Adhav 10 days ago
Such an honor to have a friend  of your caliber !!-----Feeling proud and glorious as well !!
Subhashchandra Adhav 10 days ago
Great many thanks so kindly Dear Stella for such a wondrous charming review !  
Subhashchandra Adhav 10 days ago
I so appreciate your eloquence !
Subhashchandra Adhav 10 days ago
So kind and nice of you !
Subhashchandra Adhav 10 days ago
Have a blissful day !-----Stay blessed !!
Subhashchandra Adhav 9 days ago
Thanks so kindly for the nice comparison with charming signals!
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