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Comeback (Repost)

Comeback

They took me to High Mountain
And pushed me from high altitude
Surprisingly I was not fallen
But fallen was my attitude

In deep valley
My attitude received a great shock
It became numb
And stood as a rock

Afterwards fallen was
My virtue
And on the attitudinal rock
It stood as statue

The rock and statue
Suffered deep darkness
However they were
True lovers of brightness


My attitude bounced back
And came out of shock
It was now
No more rock

Climbed up the altitude
My gritty attitude
She forgot the past
And became flag-mast

Also my precious virtue
Came out of statue
Climbed up altitude
With great gratitude

My virtue received a tag
And became flag
Fluttering flag on the mast
Compelled me to forget past
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Comeback (Repost), by Subhashchandra Adhav 5 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 4 reviews.
ARUN MAZUMDER 10 days ago
very well read
Subhashchandra Adhav 10 days ago
Thanks so kindly for your excellent review.
Subhashchandra Adhav 10 days ago
I   value your kind words.!
Subhashchandra Adhav 10 days ago
My virtue received a tag----
And became flag  !!!
Subhashchandra Adhav 10 days ago
Thank you all my readers to love my poem.
Subhashchandra Adhav 10 days ago
Wish you a happy read.
Subhashchandra Adhav 10 days ago
Happy Today   !!!
Subhashchandra Adhav 10 days ago
I appreciate the heartfelt support of my readers.
Sonja Carnes 10 days ago
You know I know your work before I see your name!
You are very good with creativity, and natural flow
Always" a step above" with a wise heart, and strong 
Mind, your work reveals it's art, but only you can 
Reveal!
Stay blessed my friend! Your work is valued!
Subhashchandra Adhav 10 days ago
Many thanks Sonja for your incredible review.
Subhashchandra Adhav 10 days ago
I'm humbled by your praise !!
Subhashchandra Adhav 10 days ago
I value your heartfelt comments.
Subhashchandra Adhav 10 days ago
Your reviews are inspiring and invigorating.
Subhashchandra Adhav 10 days ago
So nice and kind of you !
Subhashchandra Adhav 10 days ago
Your inputs are enlightening!
Subhashchandra Adhav 10 days ago
I appreciate your insightful comments !!
Subhashchandra Adhav 10 days ago
Your complimentary words mean a lot to me !
Subhashchandra Adhav 10 days ago
Blessing be upon you !1
Subhashchandra Adhav 10 days ago
May you have a blessed day !!
Subhashchandra Adhav 10 days ago
Stay blessed always Sonja  !!
Uma Natarajan 10 days ago
With gratitude. Such a nice poem as expected 
Subhashchandra Adhav 10 days ago
Thanks so kindly for such a magnificent review.
Subhashchandra Adhav 10 days ago
I value your kind words.!!
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