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My Queen Gone (Resubmit)


My Queen Gone


Your white draughts
Mine black
Next game
Yours black
Mine white—
You and me
Eyed on red queen
Though you were my
Real life queen
However in the carom game
Our interest keen

When in the game
We were engrossed fully
Invisible icy hands
Came deceitfully
They scattered draughts
Flung and threw draughts

On the board left the red queen—a single draught
On my mind—emotional drought
In my hand –a silent striker
However me an eroded striker
They lifted you!-Oh! My Queen
Desperately I looked at the red queen
On the empty board –only the red queen
Emptying me, you were gone, My Queen!!
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Subhashchandra Adhav 8 days ago
Life as a carom game !
My Queen Gone (Resubmit), by Subhashchandra Adhav 4.6 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 5 reviews.
Subhashchandra Adhav 9 days ago
Emptying me my queen gone !!
Subhashchandra Adhav 9 days ago
Thank you all my readers to love my poem!1
Subhashchandra Adhav 8 days ago
Wish you a happy read!
Subhashchandra Adhav 8 days ago
Happy Today!
Subhashchandra Adhav 8 days ago
I   appreciate the support of my readers!
Sonja Carnes 9 days ago
You're an amazing writter! Always a pleasure to read your work is valued!
Sonja Carnes 9 days ago
So beautiful, lovely 
And eloquently presented.
Amazing poem here
The King will have have 
His Queen!
Have a blessed day my friend!
Subhashchandra Adhav 9 days ago
Great many thanks Sonja for such an incredible review.!
Subhashchandra Adhav 9 days ago
I do appreciate your lovely and elegant comment !11
Subhashchandra Adhav 8 days ago
So nice and kind of you!
Subhashchandra Adhav 8 days ago
Thanks indeed for your nice appreciation!
Subhashchandra Adhav 8 days ago
I    value your encouraging comments!
Subhashchandra Adhav 8 days ago
I   so appreciate your kind words!
Subhashchandra Adhav 8 days ago
Thanks for your inspirational words!
Subhashchandra Adhav 8 days ago
Have a blissful day!
Subhashchandra Adhav 8 days ago
Stay blessed Sonja!
Sonja Carnes 9 days ago
Awesome write good poem
Subhashchandra Adhav 8 days ago
Your reviews mean a lot to me!
Mary 9 days ago
I love this poem
Subhashchandra Adhav 9 days ago
Thanks so kindly Mary for your nice review.!!
Subhashchandra Adhav 8 days ago
Thanks indeed for your nice appreciation!
Deepali Patil 5 days ago
Eloquent and expressive!
Chris Misdary 9 days ago
well expressed
Subhashchandra Adhav 8 days ago
Thanks so kindly for your excellent review!
Subhashchandra Adhav 8 days ago
Thanks indeed for your nice appreciation!
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