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Death of a star

Death of a star

In the halo of cosmic mirth
A star longed to take birth
The lovable delighted earth –
Witness to its awesome birth

It shone bright with all its might
It thought it could woo the night
It shone brighter and brighter
As night became darker and darker

It was rather innocent and hopeful
It never knew the sky was deceitful
All co-stars and cosmic bodies wore mask
Their genuineness it did not bother to ask

It glowed at par excellence
But in vast expanse, dot- like its existence
Infinity and negligence killed its virtue radiant
This is how, slowly died the star brilliant
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Death of a star, by Subhashchandra Adhav 4.8 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 9 reviews.
Iolanda Mason Italy 7 days ago
good
Subhashchandra Adhav 5 days ago
Thanks so kindly for your excellent review.
Subhashchandra Adhav 5 days ago
Thanks indeed for your nice appreciation.
Uma Natarajan 7 days ago
Star brilliant 
Subhashchandra Adhav 5 days ago
Thanks so kindly for your excellent review.
Subhashchandra Adhav 5 days ago
Thanks indeed for your nice appreciation.
John Robert 7 days ago
Slowly brilliant died,


Subhashchandra Adhav 5 days ago
Thanks so kindly for your excellent review.
Subhashchandra Adhav 5 days ago
Thanks indeed for your nice appreciation !!
Sonja Carnes 7 days ago
Amazing work here
Excellent imagery
Beautiful and special
Masterful and Intriguing
Have a blessed day
Thank you for your work!
Subhashchandra Adhav 5 days ago
Thanks so kindly for your excellent review.
Subhashchandra Adhav 5 days ago
Thanks indeed for your nice  appreciation.
Subhashchandra Adhav 5 days ago
So nice and kind of you Sonja !!
Subhashchandra Adhav 5 days ago
I value your heartfelt reviews.
Subhashchandra Adhav 5 days ago
I value your kind words.
Subhashchandra Adhav 5 days ago
Your comments mean a lot to me !!
Subhashchandra Adhav 5 days ago
Your kind words are moral boosting!
Subhashchandra Adhav 5 days ago
Your  reviews are inspiring and invigorating 1
Subhashchandra Adhav 5 days ago
May blessing be with you Sonja !!
Subhashchandra Adhav 5 days ago
Stay blessed !
Subhashchandra Adhav 5 days ago
Have a blissful day  !!1
Subhashchandra Adhav 7 days ago
Slowly died the star brilliant !
Subhashchandra Adhav 5 days ago
Thank you all my readers to love my poem.
Subhashchandra Adhav 5 days ago
Wish you a happy read !1
Subhashchandra Adhav 5 days ago
Happy Today !1
Subhashchandra Adhav 5 days ago
I appreciate the support of my readers.!!
Christopher Russon 7 days ago
Written in the stars lovely work.
Subhashchandra Adhav 5 days ago
Thanks so kindly for your excellent review.
Subhashchandra Adhav 5 days ago
Thanks indeed for your nice appreciation.
Vishal Rasgotra 7 days ago
In the halo of cosmic mirth 
A star longed to take birth 


Very nyc concept . I like it
Subhashchandra Adhav 5 days ago
Thanks so kindly for your excellent review.
Subhashchandra Adhav 5 days ago
Thanks indeed for your nice appreciation.
Agnon Legend 7 days ago
So well penned, a tale of caution not to hinder but to encourage the the light wherever it shines forth; be it knowledge or science or art or live a or philosophy
Subhashchandra Adhav 5 days ago
Thanks so kindly for your excellent review.
Subhashchandra Adhav 5 days ago
Thanks indeed for your nice appreciation.!!
Esihle Lugalo 7 days ago
But judging from the reviews it sounds amazing 
Subhashchandra Adhav 5 days ago
Thanks so kindly for your excellent review.
Subhashchandra Adhav 5 days ago
Thanks indeed for your nice appreciation.
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