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Unfortunate Me

Unfortunate Me

All that glitters is not gold
However let me have my say bold
My seemingly sharp golden life
Reduced to almost a rusted knife
All that glittered turned out to be iron
That too I realized after long run
Some are blessed with an awesome boon
Fortunate they get everywhere golden spoon
Here is miserable story to be told
I made the ornaments polished bold
Of the iron mistaken for gold
It’s vivid they are not sold
Now the iron with removed golden coat
Is gnawing my life’s currency, like fake note
My life’s diary where could have been golden quotes
Unfortunately is full of frustrated notes
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Unfortunate Me, by Subhashchandra Adhav 5 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 5 reviews.
Stella W 9 days ago

... The hardest things of life are worth

waiting for ... Serenity will come sooner

 than you think..


Stella W 9 days ago
Have a great day Adhav...
Subhashchandra Adhav 8 days ago
Many thanks so kindly for your heartfelt review 

Subhashchandra Adhav 8 days ago
Thanks indeed for your nice appreciation. 
Subhashchandra Adhav 8 days ago
So nice and kind of you Stella!
Subhashchandra Adhav 8 days ago
Have a blissful day!
Subhashchandra Adhav 8 days ago
Thanks for your kind and complimentary words. 
Subhashchandra Adhav 8 days ago
Your comments are inspiring and invigorating!
Subhashchandra Adhav 8 days ago
Have a great weekend!
Subhashchandra Adhav 8 days ago
Thanks for your complimentary words!
Subhashchandra Adhav 8 days ago
Your reviews mean a lot to me!
Subhashchandra Adhav 8 days ago
Stay blessed Stella!
Subhashchandra Adhav 10 days ago
My diary is full of frustrated notes !!
Subhashchandra Adhav 8 days ago
Thank you all my readers to love my poem. 
Subhashchandra Adhav 8 days ago
I  appreciate the support of my readers!
Subhashchandra Adhav 8 days ago
Wish you a happy read!
Subhashchandra Adhav 8 days ago
Happy Today!
Jawahar Gupta 9 days ago
very bold
nicely narrated
in a confessional way .................
All that glitters is not gold 
However, let me have my say bold 
My seemingly sharp golden life 
Reduced to almost a rusted knife 
~~~~Jawahar Gupta ~~~
Subhashchandra Adhav 8 days ago
Thank you so much for your superb review!
Subhashchandra Adhav 8 days ago
Thanks indeed for your nice appreciation. 
Salmabanu Hatim 10 days ago
Conned
Subhashchandra Adhav 8 days ago
Thanks for your amazing review!!
Subhashchandra Adhav 8 days ago
Thanks indeed for your nice appreciation 

Sonja Carnes 10 days ago
Awesome work here!
I enjoyed reading your 
Excellent poem.
Very good.
Stay blessed my friend.
kudos on this masterful
Poem.Thank you.
Subhashchandra Adhav 8 days ago
Thanks so kindly for your excellent review. 
Subhashchandra Adhav 8 days ago
Thanks indeed for your nice appreciation. 
Subhashchandra Adhav 8 days ago
So nice and kind of you!
Subhashchandra Adhav 8 days ago
I  appreciate your encouraging and valuable comments 
Subhashchandra Adhav 8 days ago
Your comments are inspiring and invigorating!
Subhashchandra Adhav 8 days ago
I  value your encouraging comments!
Subhashchandra Adhav 8 days ago
Stay blessed Sonja!
Subhashchandra Adhav 8 days ago
May blessing be with you always.
Subhashchandra Adhav 8 days ago
Stay blessed Sonja!
Subhashchandra Adhav 8 days ago
Have a blissful day!
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