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MAGIC WORLD

WE ARE IN A MAGIC WORLD  

JUST IMAGINE 

AND WE ARE DANCING TOGETHER AT THE MOON 

EVEN THE STARS ALSO 

THE CLOUDS WERE TAKING US  

AROUND THE WORLD  

THE PLANETS WERE THE GATES TO REACH THE WORLD  

WE ARE TOGETHER AND FOREVER  

LETS GO MY ANGEL  
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Cristina-Monica Moldoveanu More than 1 year ago
I agree with you, clouds are drifting us.
Felipe Chacon Jr. More than 1 year ago
Needs a bit more strengthening with emotion and feeling.
Dustin Hellinger More than 1 year ago
I'm a big dreamer, so something like this seemed right up my alley. I understand being "out there" with your work, and such things attract me, but towards a the end it sort of lost me. I liked the concept though
Michael Edward Ray More than 1 year ago
Dancing "With" the moon would sound better and more poetic than dancing "At" the moon. These are just thoughts and could have been made into a nice poem.
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