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Love (This is a repost due to the original one disappearing)

Love is an unknown thing.
It doesn’t have to have a ring.
It causes the heart to flutter.
It causes the body to shudder.
 
Love can make you fly.
Then drop you out of the sky.
But when you hit the ground.
You just go for another round.
 
Is to have loved a curse or a sin?
We will not know until the end.
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Poetry.com 4.5 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 34 reviews.
Sophy Chen More than 1 year ago
I learned so much in your poems ! Thanks John! Sophy
Akash Lama More than 1 year ago
U r right Sophie. ...
Akash Lama More than 1 year ago
Gud one john
myrahainan More than 1 year ago
i like the ending verse...yeah
vishnu varma More than 1 year ago
superb
Maria Shaw More than 1 year ago
Such true words :)
Karen Hiles More than 1 year ago
Keep the honesty, truth and respect flowing and a love can be the absolute most rewarding thing in the world.
samanthaleigh922@yahoo.com samanthaleigh922@yahoo.com More than 1 year ago
Couldn't be more factual. Raw and Beautiful.
jake stone More than 1 year ago
this really expresses how you feel, and flows easily:)
John Lowe More than 1 year ago
Thanks so much!
Simon Shreeves More than 1 year ago
Another great poem.
Desiray Staggs More than 1 year ago
Love is a lesson we all must learn ...its to be forever worked at. And always yearned. never give up ..
Anonymous More than 1 year ago
Could you please read my poem on love?
Paula Nassif More than 1 year ago
What I love about this poem is the unbounded thoughts that one can develop while trying to figure it all out :-)
John Lowe More than 1 year ago
Paula thank you so much!
Trubk Loco More than 1 year ago
I like it the words form pictures in your head and you can vision what is wrote
PHILL -OSOPHY SOUZA More than 1 year ago
nice job
irene westwood More than 1 year ago
Who knows John... Maybe both...It can be the most painful experience ...If it goes wrong.
Karah Russell More than 1 year ago
such power behind these words. so true. so very. very true!
Mark Halvorson More than 1 year ago
powerful words
Celine Bonilla More than 1 year ago
short sweet and meaningful
James Barnett More than 1 year ago
love the 2nd verse ( dont give up) Love can make you fly. Then drop you out of the sky. But when you hit the ground. You just go for another round
Jessie Meredith More than 1 year ago
yah, don't know whether you're going to get the flower or the thorns....
John Lowe More than 1 year ago
You are the best Jessie thanks!
ARUN MAZUMDER 10 months ago
well done...please review my poems....
Unique Dejesus More than 1 year ago
Well written piece. I would've gave 5 stars but I feel at the end you should've given Love a positive option; a curse or a sin are both negatives. Just a thought.
John Lowe More than 1 year ago
I respect you opinion Thank you for reviewing it.
tanmay kumar Sankhua More than 1 year ago
nice
Josie Heggaton More than 1 year ago
I like this alot
John Lowe More than 1 year ago
Thank you, Josie.
Deanne Frost More than 1 year ago
written from 2 points of veiw, always good :)
John Lowe More than 1 year ago
Yes it is Thanks for commenting!
Mike Stankewitz More than 1 year ago
Nice depth, passionate emotion
John Lowe More than 1 year ago
Mike, Thanks for reviewing!
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