Mirror
by
Amber Kolm
I look in the mirror,
And all that I see,
Is the face of a woman,
Begging to be free.
I loon in the mirror,
Seeing a woman forced to chose;
Yet no matter what she decides,
She knows that she's bound to lose!
I look in the mirror,
And the face that stares back,
Is one on the edge of sanity,
That any minute could crack!
I look in the mirror,
And see a woman lost in a sea of pain;
Terrified of the past,
And seeing the future with nothing to gain.
I look in the mirror,
But the face staring at me is blank.
After all of the laughter and tears,
You'd think that my life what just a prank!
And all that I see,
Is the face of a woman,
Begging to be free.
I loon in the mirror,
Seeing a woman forced to chose;
Yet no matter what she decides,
She knows that she's bound to lose!
I look in the mirror,
And the face that stares back,
Is one on the edge of sanity,
That any minute could crack!
I look in the mirror,
And see a woman lost in a sea of pain;
Terrified of the past,
And seeing the future with nothing to gain.
I look in the mirror,
But the face staring at me is blank.
After all of the laughter and tears,
You'd think that my life what just a prank!
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I have been faced with the toughest decision of my life. And either way, I lose. So, This poem reflects how I feel when I think about that decision.
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Poetry.com 4.6 out of 5 based on 7 votes.
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Heartfelt! You have a strong voice and a strong soul! Well done
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i lykd it :)
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Your have a brilliant writing pattern but i feel most of your poems have a negative feel for them. Mainly not my style of poetry but that still doesn't change the fact your a good writer. =)
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I like how she threw herself into the writing , It was excellent , Enjoyed it so much.
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well written
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confidence and pain, losing and laughing and all of this to add up to the point of your sanity leaving....yeah i really liked this poem.
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Life seems to be the good mixed with the bad.
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