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My heart

Eyes sparkle like a stream
she often comes in my dreams
her face like moonlight beams
lips as red as a rose they seem
\Crowning glory her shining hair
Her features intoxicating fare
average height by compare
Her portrait here set with care
\she is only created for me
she belonged to other loam
her heart palpitate for me
that is looking very groom
\my spouse is outlying from me
my mind remains for her deem
if she come everything shine
without her my heart is gloom
\Oh air! you go through fast
pass my message to her room
come fast in my banish land
without you cannot bloom
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Poetry.com 4.2 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 13 reviews.
A Soul ( poetess) More than 1 year ago
good
Farida Amin More than 1 year ago
Well expression
sathya gunasekaran More than 1 year ago
Good similes used here, nice
drkgbalakrishnan kandangath More than 1 year ago
fine
Zafar Iqbal More than 1 year ago
Thanks
Diana Sitnic 6 months ago
nice poem
Donka Krsteva More than 1 year ago
well written
Conner O'brien More than 1 year ago
Detailed and great poem
Ryan DeRome More than 1 year ago
I agree with some of the other comments that said that it was very strong in the beginning and it sort of tailed off towards the end, but you obviously have a gift for writing because the beginning was so strong. Great work :)
Stella W More than 1 year ago
good job
Abdullah Al Zayed More than 1 year ago
I think, you have a good conjugale life
Fazy Daw 7 months ago
Keep writing:-)
Edyta Greta Lapinski More than 1 year ago
Nice poem
Zafar Iqbal More than 1 year ago
Thanks a lots
Maria Cuccio More than 1 year ago
Not bad... but needs some work. Rhyming is off, words are not all correct and I can't make out what should be there so it stopped the flow and I got confused a bit...
Zafar Iqbal More than 1 year ago
Everyone has one choice okay
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