To Fly So High
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Here I sit just looking out of my window, and into the sky.
Wondering what it'll be like to fly so high.
To soar like an eagle, or to fly like a dove.
Sometimes I feel that it must be true love.
To soar through the mountains, or to fly over the ocean.
Why is it so hard to feel the motion?
To see for miles away, or to dive for my food.
Now I know what it's like to get into the groove.
So now here I sit, just looking out of my window and into the sky.
Just wondering what it would be like to fly so high . . . .
Wondering what it'll be like to fly so high.
To soar like an eagle, or to fly like a dove.
Sometimes I feel that it must be true love.
To soar through the mountains, or to fly over the ocean.
Why is it so hard to feel the motion?
To see for miles away, or to dive for my food.
Now I know what it's like to get into the groove.
So now here I sit, just looking out of my window and into the sky.
Just wondering what it would be like to fly so high . . . .
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I wrote this poem back in 1998 for my sister that passed.She reminds me of the Eagle that flies so high.And I am the Dove that is still looking for a way in life.
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Poetry.com 4.5 out of 5 based on 23 votes.
just down wright good
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I love the simplicity...
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I really like that it has some sort of rhyme to it.. But I really love the way it just flows.
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i love the flow really nice
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i like the imagery and the way u make it sound like its a daydream
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Beautiful !..poem.
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Felt like i was soaring through the sky. Beautifly put.
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ok
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That was beautiful on so many levels. I felt the emotion in there. Just wow
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i often wish what the poet has conveyed.
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very good i'm a fan
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I really think was cool nice work
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That was great, I'd love to know what it feels like to fly, just soar above.
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I could almost feel myself soaring in the sky! Awesome visuals!
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Very sound construction and thoughtful prose nicely done.
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i thought what you wrote was cute
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soaring in the sky of thoughts lifting up the emotion the poet conveyed ,yes this is the power of love.Thanks.
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The poet with the imaginative faculty open turns himself into a bird like eagle and dives, the juxtaposing images are beautiful.
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Nicely written. I enjoyed reading this.
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I really like it. the love become attached to the nature, and the animals. it's really beautiful.
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Great poem. I liked it
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very cute
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really nice
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