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Missing you

Every second,
I can feel your presence,
Even if you’re gone,
I can smell your essence.
It’s maddening,
And truly painful,
Like waking from a dream,
That was too beautiful.
It’s true, you know,
That love is pain,
Cause when it’s gone,
The hurt remains.
The joy and laughter
Suddenly seem foreign,
Feelings shatter,
Leaving your heart crawling.
It’s amazing,
What love can do!
Yet now I’m stuck,
Missing you!
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paul naragon More than 1 year ago
As stated love is powerful, but is it only someone else we can love? What of the self that is with you 24-7? If we love ourself, how can love go missing when another is gone?
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Interesting analogy, but I think the focus of this poem is quite evident. This is a topic that could be discussed via a different poem. :)
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Maria Shaw More than 1 year ago
I could read your poems forever !!!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
I'm thrilled you liked them so much!
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Kartini Basso More than 1 year ago
I understand the feelings being written here
Paul Harmon E. More than 1 year ago
a splendid poem
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you very much Paul
Charllott More than 1 year ago
nice vocabulary, nice, grammar. excellent flow, rhythm , congratulation!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Thank you very much Charllott!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
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Stephanie More than 1 year ago
love it
Joe Perez More than 1 year ago
Nice poem, very emotional
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Thank you Joe!
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shama javkar More than 1 year ago
When I have nothing to say, and the poem is out of words, I post :) :) :) so, :) :) :) :) :)...and so on...
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Heh, thank you Shama!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
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April Jones More than 1 year ago
Very nice love poem yet again!!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Glad you like it, thank you for reviewing April!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
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anupama saini More than 1 year ago
an emotional poem
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Thank you for the review!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
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Kathryn Alley More than 1 year ago
I absolutely love this It speaks to the heart!! Awesome write- I Will be back! Love and Laughter - Kat
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Thank you very much Kat!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
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Stephen Hector More than 1 year ago
Something else!
darylrobinson11 More than 1 year ago
great job
quantum photography More than 1 year ago
"Even if you’re gone, I can smell your essence. "
Cathy Martinez Lewis More than 1 year ago
I have felt this way before!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Thank you Cathy for the review!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
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Pulga Castro More than 1 year ago
Great poem very nice flow kept me intrigued the whole way through
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Glad u liked it!
Pulga Castro More than 1 year ago
Glad u wrote : )
Pulga Castro More than 1 year ago
Glad u wrote it
Eathen Lord More than 1 year ago
same here
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
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Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Free flow of words and true feelings....Well done...It appears to me as if Love and emotions are poured in a grinder and made honey of feelings to drink forever...Great work ..Gabi
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Thanks a lot for the review Asim!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
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Anna More than 1 year ago
Very touching
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
I am glad you liked it! Thank you!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
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Tia White More than 1 year ago
It is amazing what love can do, a literal " heart " ache. Great stuff!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
It is the ugly truth indeed, thank you Tia!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
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Saswat Mishra More than 1 year ago
so much feeling embedded in it.
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Thank you Saswat!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
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Shelia Snow More than 1 year ago
I know this feeling all too well for I miss someone that much as well.
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Thank you for reviewing Shelia!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
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sarah park More than 1 year ago
Clever poem
Analia Styles More than 1 year ago
Your poem really made me feel all those emotions described! Amazing!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
I am glad my poem was able to do that! Thank you! :)
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kalyopia troy More than 1 year ago
GREAT POEM
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Glad you like it!
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Dan Landa More than 1 year ago
Excellent, phenomenal, breathtaking... well, you get the idea! But in all good faith, outstanding job!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Thank you very much Dan!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
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ELIZABETH CHERNY More than 1 year ago
simply bravo!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Thank you Elizabeth!
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