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Missing you

Every second,
I can feel your presence,
Even if you’re gone,
I can smell your essence.
It’s maddening,
And truly painful,
Like waking from a dream,
That was too beautiful.
It’s true, you know,
That love is pain,
Cause when it’s gone,
The hurt remains.
The joy and laughter
Suddenly seem foreign,
Feelings shatter,
Leaving your heart crawling.
It’s amazing,
What love can do!
Yet now I’m stuck,
Missing you!
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paul naragon More than 1 year ago
As stated love is powerful, but is it only someone else we can love? What of the self that is with you 24-7? If we love ourself, how can love go missing when another is gone?
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Interesting analogy, but I think the focus of this poem is quite evident. This is a topic that could be discussed via a different poem. :)
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sarah park More than 1 year ago
Clever poem
Kartini Basso More than 1 year ago
I understand the feelings being written here
Judith Wallace More than 1 year ago
i can relate to this so much
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Thank you Judith!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
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Stephanie More than 1 year ago
love it
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Free flow of words and true feelings....Well done...It appears to me as if Love and emotions are poured in a grinder and made honey of feelings to drink forever...Great work ..Gabi
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Thanks a lot for the review Asim!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
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shama javkar More than 1 year ago
When I have nothing to say, and the poem is out of words, I post :) :) :) so, :) :) :) :) :)...and so on...
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Heh, thank you Shama!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
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Silviu More than 1 year ago
great job.deep feelings.I truly liked it.
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
I'm glad you did, thank you!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
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quantum photography More than 1 year ago
"Even if you’re gone, I can smell your essence. "
Saswat Mishra More than 1 year ago
so much feeling embedded in it.
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Thank you Saswat!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
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Saroj Khan More than 1 year ago
LIKE IT
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Thanks for reviewing!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Randy Nii More than 1 year ago
my first true love used a certain scented shampoo that just made me melt when i smelled her hair,,,mind you this has been almost 40 years ago,,,and still to this day,,if i smell that fragerence, she comes to mind,,,i really screwed that one up...
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
I know exactly what you mean, it's those "little" things that make us who we are: romantics, poets, humans! Thanks so much for reviewing Randy!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
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isaac seal More than 1 year ago
this comment is more of a poem than this poem.
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Shelia Snow More than 1 year ago
I know this feeling all too well for I miss someone that much as well.
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Thank you for reviewing Shelia!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
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sky mathews More than 1 year ago
its goood, and heart felt.yes, love can bite but you can also laught at the beautiful memories, wish each other the best till time will bring you togther again. Love doesn't leave, it lingers and warms us in cloud of illusion...
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
I agree :) Thank you for your kinds words Sky!
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Eathen Lord More than 1 year ago
I know exactly how you feel... first rate work I love the richness and emotion this evokes.
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Thank you very much for your review!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
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Maria Gracia Revilla More than 1 year ago
i loved it
Sharon Hale More than 1 year ago
I think everyone can relate to this poem.
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Thank you for the review Sharon!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
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Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
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Mariana Otil More than 1 year ago
Lovely!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Thank you Mariana!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
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CatherineM More than 1 year ago
Your words are simply beautiful.
Yosri Sallam More than 1 year ago
I agree with you 100 %.
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Thank you so much!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
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Analia Styles More than 1 year ago
Your poem really made me feel all those emotions described! Amazing!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
I am glad my poem was able to do that! Thank you! :)
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Carla Lopez More than 1 year ago
Love it!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Glad you do, thank you!
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Marentza More than 1 year ago
LOVE IT
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Thank you very much!
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Seth Lusk More than 1 year ago
I can definitely relate to this one man.... great work as always :-)
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Thanks a lot Seth!
A Soul More than 1 year ago
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Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
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Liviu Iftinca More than 1 year ago
I like how you transfer your feelings to the reader.
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Thank you very much Liviu!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
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David Miller More than 1 year ago
Love it
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
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James Barnett More than 1 year ago
awesome stuff
Paul Harmon E. More than 1 year ago
a splendid poem
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you very much Paul
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