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Missing you

Every second,
I can feel your presence,
Even if you’re gone,
I can smell your essence.
It’s maddening,
And truly painful,
Like waking from a dream,
That was too beautiful.
It’s true, you know,
That love is pain,
Cause when it’s gone,
The hurt remains.
The joy and laughter
Suddenly seem foreign,
Feelings shatter,
Leaving your heart crawling.
It’s amazing,
What love can do!
Yet now I’m stuck,
Missing you!
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paul naragon More than 1 year ago
As stated love is powerful, but is it only someone else we can love? What of the self that is with you 24-7? If we love ourself, how can love go missing when another is gone?
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Interesting analogy, but I think the focus of this poem is quite evident. This is a topic that could be discussed via a different poem. :)
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Shelby Newkirk More than 1 year ago
I really connected with this poem. You did great! It twisted my heart reading it!!!
Ann Donald More than 1 year ago
The way you expressed you missed love was wonderful. Thank you so much for sharing.
Jay Q More than 1 year ago
simply witnessing greatness here!
Maria Gracia Revilla More than 1 year ago
i loved it
James Castaneda More than 1 year ago
This poem everyone can relate to. Simply perfect
Mina S More than 1 year ago
"...love is pain, Cause when it’s gone, The hurt remains." absolutely love this poem. it's so relatable in so many ways.
Aja Futuredoc More than 1 year ago
I really enjoy reading your poems, I write too. But I am not as brave as you to post most of them. But I guess I should get over that soon. This forum is a great way to become a better writer.
Diane Heller More than 1 year ago
Love it!!
tony miller More than 1 year ago
keep it up
darylrobinson11 More than 1 year ago
great job
Marissa More than 1 year ago
Love reading this!
Helen Garve More than 1 year ago
Agreed, with other posts :)
nancy hoffman More than 1 year ago
beautifully written can feel your pain in this
Syed Vasif More than 1 year ago
thanks
sarah park More than 1 year ago
Clever poem
Demetry Aniv More than 1 year ago
Its hard, for sure it is
Tai Jones More than 1 year ago
Been there
Sebastion douglas More than 1 year ago
GREAT
Stephanie More than 1 year ago
love it
Dawn Miller More than 1 year ago
Cool buddy
Stephen Hector More than 1 year ago
Something else!
Michelle Antoni More than 1 year ago
So true
quantum photography More than 1 year ago
"Even if you’re gone, I can smell your essence. "
Daryl Ark More than 1 year ago
Beautiful
Katie ! More than 1 year ago
Proud of you.
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