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Missing you

Every second,
I can feel your presence,
Even if you’re gone,
I can smell your essence.
It’s maddening,
And truly painful,
Like waking from a dream,
That was too beautiful.
It’s true, you know,
That love is pain,
Cause when it’s gone,
The hurt remains.
The joy and laughter
Suddenly seem foreign,
Feelings shatter,
Leaving your heart crawling.
It’s amazing,
What love can do!
Yet now I’m stuck,
Missing you!
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paul naragon More than 1 year ago
As stated love is powerful, but is it only someone else we can love? What of the self that is with you 24-7? If we love ourself, how can love go missing when another is gone?
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Interesting analogy, but I think the focus of this poem is quite evident. This is a topic that could be discussed via a different poem. :)
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Diana More than 1 year ago
Original and great
muneeba hamid More than 1 year ago
overwhelming really...thankyou for sharing
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
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Rolando Alvarez More than 1 year ago
you are a truly talented word smith and i bow to your abilty to perfectly string together word
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
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kalyopia troy More than 1 year ago
GREAT POEM
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Glad you like it!
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Andy Baez More than 1 year ago
I can't remember which one but it does. But i disagree in one point. Love may somtimes cause pain, but i'm naive enough still to say that love is not pain.
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Agree to disagree! :) Thank you for the review!
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shir hanochi More than 1 year ago
Wow
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
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Sharon Hale More than 1 year ago
I think everyone can relate to this poem.
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Thank you for the review Sharon!
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Princess More than 1 year ago
Feelings, talent and ingenuity. Keep writing about love
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
I will do my best, thank you!
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Dan Landa More than 1 year ago
Excellent, phenomenal, breathtaking... well, you get the idea! But in all good faith, outstanding job!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Thank you very much Dan!
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Charllott More than 1 year ago
nice vocabulary, nice, grammar. excellent flow, rhythm , congratulation!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Thank you very much Charllott!
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Lidia More than 1 year ago
I LOVE IT!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
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Eathen Lord More than 1 year ago
I know exactly how you feel... first rate work I love the richness and emotion this evokes.
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Thank you very much for your review!
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Paul Harmon E. More than 1 year ago
a splendid poem
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you very much Paul
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Free flow of words and true feelings....Well done...It appears to me as if Love and emotions are poured in a grinder and made honey of feelings to drink forever...Great work ..Gabi
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Thanks a lot for the review Asim!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
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sky mathews More than 1 year ago
its goood, and heart felt.yes, love can bite but you can also laught at the beautiful memories, wish each other the best till time will bring you togther again. Love doesn't leave, it lingers and warms us in cloud of illusion...
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
I agree :) Thank you for your kinds words Sky!
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Pulga Castro More than 1 year ago
Great poem very nice flow kept me intrigued the whole way through
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Glad u liked it!
Pulga Castro More than 1 year ago
Glad u wrote : )
Pulga Castro More than 1 year ago
Glad u wrote it
Eathen Lord More than 1 year ago
same here
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
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nancy hoffman More than 1 year ago
beautifully written can feel your pain in this
Marentza More than 1 year ago
LOVE IT
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Thank you very much!
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christine gorham More than 1 year ago
loved it!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Thank you Christine!
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Dawn Miller More than 1 year ago
Cool buddy
shama javkar More than 1 year ago
When I have nothing to say, and the poem is out of words, I post :) :) :) so, :) :) :) :) :)...and so on...
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Heh, thank you Shama!
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Carla Lopez More than 1 year ago
Love it!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Glad you do, thank you!
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Maria Gracia Revilla More than 1 year ago
i loved it
Halee Na More than 1 year ago
This is sort-of heart breaking...in a way. It's utterly amazing though.
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Inspired by true events :( I'm glad you like it!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
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Seth Lusk More than 1 year ago
I can definitely relate to this one man.... great work as always :-)
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Thanks a lot Seth!
A Soul More than 1 year ago
HI GABRIEL! ITS MY B'DAY. READ MY POEM 'A WALK THROUGH MY LIFE'
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
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