Is That A Poem You’re Writing - part VII

Hello Again, Faheem, How are you doing up there? Thank you for your comment about this poem Have you seen the others in the series? I hope you will like some of the too! http://www.poetry.com/poems/256355-Is-That-A-Poem-You-re-Writing-part-I http://www.poetry.com/poems/256387-Is-That-A-Poem-You-re-Writing-part-II http://www.poetry.com/poems/256402-Is-That-A-Poem-You-re-Writing-part-III http://www.poetry.com/poems/256472-Is-That-A-Poem-You-re-Writing-part-IV http://www.poetry.com/poems/256480-Is-That-A-Poem-You-re-Writing-part-V http://www.poetry.com/poems/256498-Is-That-A-Poem-You-re-Writing-part-VI http://www.poetry.com/poems/256553-Is-That-A-Poem-You-re-Writing-part-VII http://www.poetry.com/poems/256591-Is-That-A-Poem-You-re-Writing-part-VIII http://www.poetry.com/poems/256604-Is-That-A-Poem-You-re-Writing-part-IX http://www.poetry.com/poems/653488-Is-That-A-Poem-You-re-Writing-part-X http://www.poetry.com/poems/653704-Is-That-A-Poem-You-re-Writing-part-XI Best wishes Dr Neil Stewart McLeod

Hello Nick,In Kenya we say Jambo, Jambo Ndugu Yango ( Hello my Brother) This is one stanza in a series I have been writing. You might like to see the rest of the series: http://www.poetry.com/poems/256355-Is-That-A-Poem-You-re-Writing-part-I http://www.poetry.com/poems/256387-Is-That-A-Poem-You-re-Writing-part-II http://www.poetry.com/poems/256402-Is-That-A-Poem-You-re-Writing-part-III http://www.poetry.com/poems/256472-Is-That-A-Poem-You-re-Writing-part-IV http://www.poetry.com/poems/256480-Is-That-A-Poem-You-re-Writing-part-V http://www.poetry.com/poems/256498-Is-That-A-Poem-You-re-Writing-part-VI http://www.poetry.com/poems/256553-Is-That-A-Poem-You-re-Writing-part-VII http://www.poetry.com/poems/256591-Is-That-A-Poem-You-re-Writing-part-VIII http://www.poetry.com/poems/256604-Is-That-A-Poem-You-re-Writing-part-IX http://www.poetry.com/poems/653488-Is-That-A-Poem-You-re-Writing-part-X http://www.poetry.com/poems/653704-Is-That-A-Poem-You-re-Writing-part-XI Thank you, or as we say in Kenya, Asante sana!

Dear Shakil, Thank you for responding to my poetic effort, and for perceiving the admonishment. I shall look for your poems. There are more in this series that you can review here: http://poetry.com/users/45247 Dr Neil Stewart McLeod

There are a number of other stanzas related to the same topic that may give you more satisfaction. Thank you for reviewing my work, and for the favorable comment. You can read more here on my profile: http://poetry.com/users/45247 Dr Neil Stewart McLeod

Ah! It does rhyme doesn't it. Thank you for liking it! have you read the others? You can see them on my profile. I hope you will read a comment on some of my other poems:http://poetry.com/users/45247 Dr Neil Stewart McLeod

Thank you Dale, I am going to take a look at that. I am working on this series as I think you can see. Here are the other klinks: http://www.poetry.com/poems/256355-Is-That-A-Poem-You-re-Writing-part-I http://www.poetry.com/poems/256387-Is-That-A-Poem-You-re-Writing-part-II http://www.poetry.com/poems/256402-Is-That-A-Poem-You-re-Writing-part-III http://www.poetry.com/poems/256472-Is-That-A-Poem-You-re-Writing-part-IV http://www.poetry.com/poems/256480-Is-That-A-Poem-You-re-Writing-part-V http://www.poetry.com/poems/256498-Is-That-A-Poem-You-re-Writing-part-VI http://www.poetry.com/poems/256553-Is-That-A-Poem-You-re-Writing-part-VII http://www.poetry.com/poems/256591-Is-That-A-Poem-You-re-Writing-part-VIII http://www.poetry.com/poems/256604-Is-That-A-Poem-You-re-Writing-part-IX http://www.poetry.com/poems/653488-Is-That-A-Poem-You-re-Writing-part-X http://www.poetry.com/poems/653704-Is-That-A-Poem-You-re-Writing-part-XI Best wishes Dr Neil