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All that I desire

All that I desire from you,
Is the sweetness of your words,
The warmth of your gestures,
That last glass of water
When stuck in between worlds,
Struggling not to die!

All that I desire from you,
Is exactly what you can offer:
A promise that lasts a little longer,
Than our poignant present!
Greater than my hunger,
Of love for you, my beloved.
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mahsa sh More than 1 year ago
nice
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
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Nanah Conteh More than 1 year ago
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Janet Beeler 23 days ago
I can relate to the love you have for this person and when you can write a poem that people can relate to you have achieved something very special! God bless! 

Bamm Lasquety 3 months ago
Great rhythm and ending!
Dee Claze 7 months ago
Like it
Scott Tudhope More than 1 year ago
I like the thought process on this one!
Renuka Krishnaraja More than 1 year ago
Wonderful words
Chris Bohannan More than 1 year ago
Great flow and good choice of words
Kay Brantley More than 1 year ago
i can almost picture the feeling
Faheem Jawaid More than 1 year ago
A beautiful write Gabriel. Loved it.
Kris Rozzetti More than 1 year ago
Really lovely
nissa hart More than 1 year ago
Very sweet and romantic!
Rachel Jackson More than 1 year ago
Life truly is eternal.
Josephat Thompson More than 1 year ago
We struggle not to die and hope to live if all we desire are: the sweetness of words, kind gestures, the soft touch, the caress and kiss and eternal bliss.
Remi Levesque More than 1 year ago
It's fun when both lovers talks to each other.
Akham Nilabir More than 1 year ago
these one can easily offer give enormous well being.
Ilydico M More than 1 year ago
Brought tears to my eyes...Touched my soul.
Bobby Ferguson More than 1 year ago
I love this
Chiugo Akaolisa More than 1 year ago
We have similar writing styles. Please check out my poem http://www.poetry.com/poems/1344285-TWO-PLANES-OF-EXISTENCE
Jaden Brooks More than 1 year ago
Amazing, great job!
Jessica Kidwell More than 1 year ago
Beautifully written... I love it
tony right More than 1 year ago
this is really beautiful ...a true poet
Oscar Dylan More than 1 year ago
Wow, I really love this but I think the author underestimates the potency of the exclamation mark. It really threw me off and seemed a bit over-the-top. With that said, only because of the use of exclamation marks does this poem so fantastically capture the dichotomy between the soft rest of death and that grasping violence of death- as the author put it- 'stuck between worlds'. Nicely done.
Kay Moreno More than 1 year ago
Beautifully written, very soulful.
Bongkot Zeigler More than 1 year ago
Very beautiful...
ANGELA USELMAN More than 1 year ago
This is amazing writing and makes me want to start writing again. Thanks for the good read
Olivene Thomas More than 1 year ago
A very pretty poem: the imagery and the words that you've used to convey them are almost immaculate. I would just delete the word "in" from before the word "between" to make it perfect...
Peggy Langdon More than 1 year ago
Your words provoke the inner soul...lovely!!
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