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All that I desire

All that I desire from you,
Is the sweetness of your words,
The warmth of your gestures,
That last glass of water
When stuck in between worlds,
Struggling not to die!

All that I desire from you,
Is exactly what you can offer:
A promise that lasts a little longer,
Than our poignant present!
Greater than my hunger,
Of love for you, my beloved.
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mahsa sh More than 1 year ago
nice
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
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Shelia Snow More than 1 year ago
Gabriel is am amazing poet.
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Thank you Shelia!
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Solomon Kamara More than 1 year ago
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Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
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Observer k More than 1 year ago
Left me trembling
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Glad you liked it, thank you!
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Marentza More than 1 year ago
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Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
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Kay Moreno More than 1 year ago
Beautifully written, very soulful.
anonymous writer More than 1 year ago
very nice
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Thank you!
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FredMLassonde More than 1 year ago
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Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Thank you Fred!
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Lori Ramsey-Mouser More than 1 year ago
I can relate, well done!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Thank you Lori, much appreciated!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
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Caleb Smith More than 1 year ago
just great!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Thank you Sir, glad you like it! :)
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
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Lupita Vicente More than 1 year ago
wow, great poem. love, passion
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Thank you Lupita!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you again
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Len Lewis More than 1 year ago
This one takes you places
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Tochukwu Esq More than 1 year ago
great
Megan Webb More than 1 year ago
Very very well done. Heart melting (:
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Thank you Megan! My inspiration for this particular poem was my desire for meeting someone that's simply honest. I am still on this quest!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you very much
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Alina More than 1 year ago
very well put together
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Thank you Alina!
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Henra H More than 1 year ago
Great job!!!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Thanks a lot man, glad you liked it!
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LIZY GARCIA More than 1 year ago
beautiful
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Glad you like it Lizy! Thank you!
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Midhat Talha More than 1 year ago
selfless approach, pure and true feelings. words are a very strong tool for heart breaking as well as heart joining. one should be true to himself as well as with others. terrific poem indeed.
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Renuka Krishnaraja More than 1 year ago
Wonderful words
Regay Wolf More than 1 year ago
This is so pretty. It pulls you into the words. Takes you to where the readers mind was.
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Thank you for reviewing!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you again
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Dima Kantarovich More than 1 year ago
Such great work
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Thanks lots Dima!
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thank you again
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Olivene Thomas More than 1 year ago
A very pretty poem: the imagery and the words that you've used to convey them are almost immaculate. I would just delete the word "in" from before the word "between" to make it perfect...
Massiel Cardenas More than 1 year ago
Love the passion in your words... you are really inspired! I am having technical difficulties here ... How can rate this poem if I do not have more stars to do it? 5 stars are not enough!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
I am flattered by your generosity!! A 100 thanks!
Massiel Cardenas More than 1 year ago
:0ops! I forgot the "I" in How can... anyway, after reading such amazing lines anything can happen! lol;-)
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you very much
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Gladys Bracey More than 1 year ago
It's a very lovely, passionate poem. It can certainly melt a heart Gabriel:)
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Thank you Gladys, I'm happy you like it!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you again
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Enjoyed reading
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Doug Gallimore More than 1 year ago
Great poem!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Thanks a lot Doug!
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thank you again
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