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All that I desire

All that I desire from you,
Is the sweetness of your words,
The warmth of your gestures,
That last glass of water
When stuck in between worlds,
Struggling not to die!

All that I desire from you,
Is exactly what you can offer:
A promise that lasts a little longer,
Than our poignant present!
Greater than my hunger,
Of love for you, my beloved.
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mahsa sh More than 1 year ago
nice
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
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Nanah Conteh More than 1 year ago
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Oscar Dylan 6 months ago
Wow, I really love this but I think the author underestimates the potency of the exclamation mark. It really threw me off and seemed a bit over-the-top. With that said, only because of the use of exclamation marks does this poem so fantastically capture the dichotomy between the soft rest of death and that grasping violence of death- as the author put it- 'stuck between worlds'. Nicely done.
Kay Moreno 7 months ago
Beautifully written, very soulful.
Bongkot Zeigler 9 months ago
Very beautiful...
ANGELA USELMAN 10 months ago
This is amazing writing and makes me want to start writing again. Thanks for the good read
Olivene Thomas 10 months ago
A very pretty poem: the imagery and the words that you've used to convey them are almost immaculate. I would just delete the word "in" from before the word "between" to make it perfect...
Peggy Langdon 11 months ago
Your words provoke the inner soul...lovely!!
Jessica Barrett 12 months ago
Well written, and great images.
Katelynn Pittman More than 1 year ago
Beautifully written
Shannon Clarke More than 1 year ago
so incredibly beautiful
James Carroway More than 1 year ago
so much in so few words
Chit Mee More than 1 year ago
Nicely written
Emalee Egelund More than 1 year ago
I find this so simple yet so beautifully written. I enjoy how we can convey such a strong emotion into such little words.
Betty Johnson More than 1 year ago
nicely stated, a nice form of desire
Arnab Kumar Roy More than 1 year ago
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mihaela pirjol More than 1 year ago
Cit de romantic! superb!
K. A. Venhuizen More than 1 year ago
Very sweet and romantic! Well written and very tender!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Thank you very much!
Bill Cantrell More than 1 year ago
Desire has so many different faces and hungers, Yours is one where emotion is true Great!!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Thanks Bill!
Ariel Celis More than 1 year ago
Totally love it.
Tochukwu Esq More than 1 year ago
great
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Thank you Ariel!
mahsa sh More than 1 year ago
like
Tochukwu Esq More than 1 year ago
great
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Thank you Mahsa!
Howard mitchell More than 1 year ago
Cool lines
Tochukwu Esq More than 1 year ago
great
Linda Hannaford More than 1 year ago
~~ Hat off to you~~
Tochukwu Esq More than 1 year ago
great
Taylor Stamford More than 1 year ago
greeat
Tochukwu Esq More than 1 year ago
great
Nick Adegwe-Oshomah More than 1 year ago
This is great good poetry of love. I love it. Really smooth , sweet and unique talent
Tochukwu Esq More than 1 year ago
great
Midhat Talha More than 1 year ago
selfless approach, pure and true feelings. words are a very strong tool for heart breaking as well as heart joining. one should be true to himself as well as with others. terrific poem indeed.
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Len Lewis More than 1 year ago
This one takes you places
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