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All that I desire

All that I desire from you,
Is the sweetness of your words,
The warmth of your gestures,
That last glass of water
When stuck in between worlds,
Struggling not to die!

All that I desire from you,
Is exactly what you can offer:
A promise that lasts a little longer,
Than our poignant present!
Greater than my hunger,
Of love for you, my beloved.
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mahsa sh More than 1 year ago
nice
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
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Nanah Conteh More than 1 year ago
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yakov kantarovich More than 1 year ago
Amazingly said
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Thank you very much Yakov!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you again
Bong Herbert Guitang More than 1 year ago
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Bong Herbert Guitang More than 1 year ago
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Tochukwu Esq More than 1 year ago
great
Adriana More than 1 year ago
Gabriel,great job!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Thank you very much Adriana!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Bong Herbert Guitang More than 1 year ago
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Edward Willard More than 1 year ago
a beautiful story and picture being painted here. I love this work!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Thank you very much Edward!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you very much
Bong Herbert Guitang More than 1 year ago
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Tochukwu Esq More than 1 year ago
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carla lopez More than 1 year ago
Great!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Thank you very much Carla!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Bong Herbert Guitang More than 1 year ago
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tony miller More than 1 year ago
I love this poem
Bong Herbert Guitang More than 1 year ago
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Bong Herbert Guitang More than 1 year ago
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Tochukwu Esq More than 1 year ago
great
Isaac Rodriguez More than 1 year ago
The last glass and exactly what you offer were my favorite parts
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
I am glad you liked it Isaac! The last glass is also my favorite :) Thank you!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Bong Herbert Guitang More than 1 year ago
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Tochukwu Esq More than 1 year ago
great
Aaron Bechthold More than 1 year ago
This is spot on. You sir, know what's up. I love the focus on life's little things in this piece.
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Thank you very much Aaron!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you very much
Bong Herbert Guitang More than 1 year ago
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Tochukwu Esq More than 1 year ago
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Megan Webb More than 1 year ago
Very very well done. Heart melting (:
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Thank you Megan! My inspiration for this particular poem was my desire for meeting someone that's simply honest. I am still on this quest!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you very much
Bong Herbert Guitang More than 1 year ago
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Tochukwu Esq More than 1 year ago
great
Ada More than 1 year ago
A touching poem. Love it!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Thank you very much!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
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Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
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Bong Herbert Guitang More than 1 year ago
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Bong Herbert Guitang More than 1 year ago
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Aarush Gupta More than 1 year ago
really good
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Thank you Aarush!
Bong Herbert Guitang More than 1 year ago
Nice and intelligent review Kindly review my poems" Keep on Writing" "Your Smile is like a poetry" Your Kiss is like a poetry or links: http://poetry.com/poets/295129-Bong%20Herbert%20Guitang/797794-KEEP-ON-WRITING# http://poetry.com/poems/810492-YOUR-KISS-IS-LIKE-A-POETRY http://poetry.com/poems/808405-Your-SMILE-is-like-a-POEM-
Bong Herbert Guitang More than 1 year ago
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Bong Herbert Guitang More than 1 year ago
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Tochukwu Esq More than 1 year ago
great
Kris Rozzetti More than 1 year ago
Really lovely
Randy Gray More than 1 year ago
You deliver much emotion in this one. I find that the hardest thing to do.
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Thank you so much Randy!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you again
Bong Herbert Guitang More than 1 year ago
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Tochukwu Esq More than 1 year ago
great
Kayley Byrnes More than 1 year ago
That's all I can say.
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
You have my thanks Kayley!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you very much
Bong Herbert Guitang More than 1 year ago
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Tochukwu Esq More than 1 year ago
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Diane Rankin More than 1 year ago
Great Poem Gabriel ....love your play on words, which are wrapped in love themselves :).....Keep up the Gd work ..
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Thank you Diane, I'm happy you liked it!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Bong Herbert Guitang More than 1 year ago
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Tochukwu Esq More than 1 year ago
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James Barnett More than 1 year ago
Gabriel, you are very talented and you write such beautiful poetry. - loved this one. Sent you a FB request
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Request accepted! Once more I'm flattered by your praise, glad you like it James!
george More than 1 year ago
James, I checked this poem out five times like you urged, but it was the same each time!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Thank you George, You are wonderful :)
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you very much
Bong Herbert Guitang More than 1 year ago
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Tochukwu Esq More than 1 year ago
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Catherine Boyce More than 1 year ago
I enjoyed the hopeful tone.
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
I'm glad you did! Thank you!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you very much
Bong Herbert Guitang More than 1 year ago
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Bong Herbert Guitang More than 1 year ago
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Seth Lusk More than 1 year ago
Some powerful statements made here... Really enjoyed it... Thank you for sharing
Bong Herbert Guitang More than 1 year ago
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Tochukwu Esq More than 1 year ago
great
Chris Bohannan More than 1 year ago
Great flow and good choice of words
Gladys Bracey More than 1 year ago
It's a very lovely, passionate poem. It can certainly melt a heart Gabriel:)
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Thank you Gladys, I'm happy you like it!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you again
Bong Herbert Guitang More than 1 year ago
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Sarah More than 1 year ago
i idolize you! your so amazing please check out mine your critique would mean so much to me
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
I am flattered thank you so much!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you again
Bong Herbert Guitang More than 1 year ago
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Bong Herbert Guitang More than 1 year ago
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Tochukwu Esq More than 1 year ago
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Malik Amjad Haider More than 1 year ago
well done
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Thank you!
Bong Herbert Guitang More than 1 year ago
Nice and intelligent review Kindly review my poems" Keep on Writing" "Your Smile is like a poetry" Your Kiss is like a poetry or links: http://poetry.com/poets/295129-Bong%20Herbert%20Guitang/797794-KEEP-ON-WRITING# http://poetry.com/poems/810492-YOUR-KISS-IS-LIKE-A-POETRY http://poetry.com/poems/808405-Your-SMILE-is-like-a-POEM-
Bong Herbert Guitang More than 1 year ago
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Tochukwu Esq More than 1 year ago
great
Lynn More than 1 year ago
Great poem, keep up the good writing!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Thank you Lynn!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you very much
Bong Herbert Guitang More than 1 year ago
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Tochukwu Esq More than 1 year ago
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Tiffany Porter More than 1 year ago
sweet poem
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Thanks Tiffany!
Bong Herbert Guitang More than 1 year ago
Nice and intelligent review Kindly review my poems" Keep on Writing" "Your Smile is like a poetry" Your Kiss is like a poetry or links: http://poetry.com/poets/295129-Bong%20Herbert%20Guitang/797794-KEEP-ON-WRITING# http://poetry.com/poems/810492-YOUR-KISS-IS-LIKE-A-POETRY http://poetry.com/poems/808405-Your-SMILE-is-like-a-POEM-
Bong Herbert Guitang More than 1 year ago
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Bong Herbert Guitang More than 1 year ago
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Tochukwu Esq More than 1 year ago
great
LM Expediter More than 1 year ago
Desire. Deep feelings. Soul. Great read!!!!!!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Glad you enjoyed it!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you very much
Bong Herbert Guitang More than 1 year ago
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Bong Herbert Guitang More than 1 year ago
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Tochukwu Esq More than 1 year ago
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Keely McElroy More than 1 year ago
This almost feels like it could be a little longer. I think the ending feels like I am left hanging although that could be intentional to make that reader feel as the narrator does. ;) Love it.
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Sometimes less is more! :)) Glad you like it Keely!!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you very much
Bong Herbert Guitang More than 1 year ago
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