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All that I desire

All that I desire from you,
Is the sweetness of your words,
The warmth of your gestures,
That last glass of water
When stuck in between worlds,
Struggling not to die!

All that I desire from you,
Is exactly what you can offer:
A promise that lasts a little longer,
Than our poignant present!
Greater than my hunger,
Of love for you, my beloved.
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mahsa sh More than 1 year ago
nice
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
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Malik Amjad Haider More than 1 year ago
well done
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Thank you!
Bong Herbert Guitang More than 1 year ago
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Tiffany Porter More than 1 year ago
sweet poem
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Thanks Tiffany!
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LM Expediter More than 1 year ago
Desire. Deep feelings. Soul. Great read!!!!!!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
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Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
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dana vanca More than 1 year ago
how romantic..:)
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Glad you like it! Thank you!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
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Hari More than 1 year ago
Between the cup and the slip remains the aching.
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Thank you Hari!
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Diane Mangion More than 1 year ago
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Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
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Tochukwu Esq More than 1 year ago
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Maleymi Burgos More than 1 year ago
i think we all feel like this at one point in time
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
I agree. Thank you very much for the review!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
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Adrian More than 1 year ago
really fillings!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
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Cit de romantic! superb!
David Miller More than 1 year ago
Good Job!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
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Mariana Otil More than 1 year ago
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Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
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Valeriy Ostapenko More than 1 year ago
real LOVE
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Thank you Valeriy
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
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Nicole Gilbert More than 1 year ago
You have a way with words, saying so much with so few!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Thank you Nicole! Glad you like them!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
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Tochukwu Esq More than 1 year ago
great
dave More than 1 year ago
EXCELLENT
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Thank you Dave!
Bong Herbert Guitang More than 1 year ago
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Tochukwu Esq More than 1 year ago
great
HJ Espina More than 1 year ago
i had that feeling - i fell in love before, so deep that i was "struggling not to die" having those emotions. reading this piece made me travel back in time to my days of eternal love. whew! =) thank you for sharing this piece of art.
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Thank you for reviewing!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
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En. Spence More than 1 year ago
This is why I fall in love with poets... they can soften your heart with just a few well chosen words! Great Job, my friend!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
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Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
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Angela More than 1 year ago
Got goosebumps when read this poem!!! Absolutely beautiful!!!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you so much Angela
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
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Bamm Lasquety More than 1 year ago
Great rhythm and ending!
Isaac Rodriguez More than 1 year ago
The last glass and exactly what you offer were my favorite parts
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
I am glad you liked it Isaac! The last glass is also my favorite :) Thank you!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
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Bong Herbert Guitang More than 1 year ago
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Tochukwu Esq More than 1 year ago
great
Doug Gallimore More than 1 year ago
Great poem!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Thanks a lot Doug!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you again
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Michelle Antoni More than 1 year ago
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Bong Herbert Guitang More than 1 year ago
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Tochukwu Esq More than 1 year ago
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LIZY GARCIA More than 1 year ago
beautiful
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Glad you like it Lizy! Thank you!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you very much
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Janina Jayme More than 1 year ago
BEAUTIFUL POEM AND THAT IS ALL ANY ONE CAN ASK..GOOD WRITING...
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Thank you Janina!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
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Henra H More than 1 year ago
Great job!!!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Thanks a lot man, glad you liked it!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
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Mario More than 1 year ago
Well done!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
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