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Blue Jay

A lost and lonely girl
In an even lost and lonely world
Trying to figure it all out
Trying to figure what's she's all about
Lost some, gained some
She even changed some
Through it all she felt so numb

Blue Jay please protect her
From all the hurt the world brings
Blue Jay please forgive her
For all the mistakes she has made
Wipe all the tears she cries
Help this phoenix begin to rise
Blue Jay watch this girl fly

A little girl trying to become a woman
With no help from others, as she tries to follow your plan
A sinner just wanting you to answer her prayers
Her broken heart fails to be repaired
 Forgave some, forgot some
Even cried for some
Through it all she felt so numb

Blue Jay please guide her
Because she feels so lost
Blue Jay please hug her
She feels like a lost cause
 Wipe all the tears she cries
Help this phoenix continue to rise
Blue Jay watch this girl fly

Blue Jay please care for her
Because she's a troubled girl
Blue Jay please love her
You're the only sanity she has in this cold lonely world. 
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Poetry.com 3.8 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 4 reviews.
Janae Stewart More than 1 year ago
wow this is too cute
Elizabeth More than 1 year ago
Heartfelt and relatable.
Buffy LightYear More than 1 year ago
Thanks and I'm glad you think its relatable : )
Cecelia See More than 1 year ago
I really like this.
Buffy LightYear More than 1 year ago
Thanks : )
Riley Barker More than 1 year ago
I really do like this poem but it just feels like it's unfinished. It seemed like there was a build up but it abruptly halted at the end. If it had more complete closure to it, whether a happy ending or a sad one, I would definitely give it five stars.
Buffy LightYear More than 1 year ago
Thanks for your input and advice. I will work on this : )
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