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Cloud Variations

Brilliant yellow sunlight
Pours down from a pale blue sky
Directly overhead.
Stark white puffs
Dot an azure eastern vista.
Towering black storm
Rises to the west
While rows of alternating
Off-white and mid-blue
March on either flank
With an occasional fluff
Rising above the ranks.
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Greg Schroeder More than 1 year ago
Thanks for the early returns. The intention is a simple word picture showing an unusual natural formation.
Poetry.com 4 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 56 reviews.
Juanita Cullen More than 1 year ago
Love the description of the sky.
Lokesh Roy More than 1 year ago
right
Yashpaul Kalra More than 1 year ago
good
Evan Spaulding More than 1 year ago
SKILLED!
A Olivia Witkowski More than 1 year ago
This imagery is beautifully described without frivolous waste.
Karen Habermehl More than 1 year ago
GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!
Kandace Green More than 1 year ago
You have painted a picture so well with your words I felt like I was really standing in the presance of it, Well done!
Dips Lawati More than 1 year ago
nature in thought but this depiction is little like that of cummings
Shane Conlon More than 1 year ago
i enjoyed reading this very meaningful
Celesta Feely More than 1 year ago
One of my favorite subjects... well done
hosein shafiei More than 1 year ago
i love it.
Yashpaul Kalra More than 1 year ago
nice
Iliyan Yurukov More than 1 year ago
nice!
diane Caruana More than 1 year ago
well done
Tiger Mood More than 1 year ago
well expressed the choice of diction gives it a rythm within
Lola Ruskov More than 1 year ago
I have seen exactly this, down in the Gulf Shores. You paint the words well!
ginny g More than 1 year ago
I think the flow of the poem itself had a rhyme and wouldn't change a thing. :)
Ess Teekay More than 1 year ago
well written
Isabel El-Magrabi More than 1 year ago
Stunning imagery, I'm very impressed.
MissKelly Giles More than 1 year ago
I really like this and think you wrote this wonderfully!!
Yashpaul Kalra More than 1 year ago
wonderful..
D Miller More than 1 year ago
I have flown Cessna's for the better part of 14 years, and have looked out of my small cabin and seen what you are speaking of here. There aren't many people that can express such grandeur in so few words.
M. Barron More than 1 year ago
Hey, thanks. This is one of the better comments I've seen in quite a while on here.
karen sinclair More than 1 year ago
Once i got to the flanks and rising ranks i believed these clouds to be deemed as an army continually on the move and battling for the sky... wonderfully mature write which has a great balance of visuals and description...loved it tyvm ..karen Ps love that you added no high faluting words just a good honest write
Greg Schroeder More than 1 year ago
Sorry, been off-line for a while. Thank you for the very pleasant and thoughtful review.
Lokesh Roy More than 1 year ago
very true
Kev Green More than 1 year ago
A good foundation although it loses itself in the choice of words.
April Taylor More than 1 year ago
You gave me picture perfect image with your word
Marc Ernest Biala More than 1 year ago
and very cognitive and descriptive~
Sharon Fowler More than 1 year ago
sounds like you're talking about the weather i like it
Trang Nguyen More than 1 year ago
Off-white and mid-blue
Karen Conley More than 1 year ago
It takes a minute as you read it to see where your coming from..And I got it ...I thought you did a great job, please continue to write...
Yashpaul Kalra More than 1 year ago
good
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