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My Muses-02-06

My Muses-02-06
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There is only a moment born;
The one that has gone is reborn;
Me the dunce am numbering in vain;
The wheel is wheeling smooth an’ fine!
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Britney Steed More than 1 year ago
read my poems
Poetry.com 3.6 out of 5 based on 15 votes.
Britney Steed More than 1 year ago
great work awesome message
drkgbalakrishna More than 1 year ago
good
drkgbalakrishna More than 1 year ago
good
Suzanne Feldschmied More than 1 year ago
My takeaway is a simple poem about the cycle of life / death and reincarnation whether it is spiritual or natural (it can be read on both levels). So it is complete and multifaceted. A lovely read. Please review my poem 'UNCOMMITTED COMMITMENT' I would welcome your comments / suggestions. Thank you!
drkgbalakrishna More than 1 year ago
Sure.
Larry Stallings More than 1 year ago
humor abounds in verse
haiku artist More than 1 year ago
though my muse left me long ago, her memory never ceased to glow
Dustin Twiggs More than 1 year ago
what more can I say?
drkgbalakrishna More than 1 year ago
good
Ruth Courtney More than 1 year ago
I like the short ones best
drkgbalakrishna More than 1 year ago
good
Barbara Cadogan More than 1 year ago
Liked it.
drkgbalakrishna More than 1 year ago
good
drkgbalakrishna More than 1 year ago
good
Subrata Ray More than 1 year ago
Nice .
drkgbalakrishna More than 1 year ago
good
drkgbalakrishna More than 1 year ago
good
Rose Greedy More than 1 year ago
It stimulates thought in a spinning way
drkgbalakrishna More than 1 year ago
good
Wilder Moncada More than 1 year ago
I feel it is not complete
drkgbalakrishna More than 1 year ago
good
Nick More than 1 year ago
good
Emily Converse More than 1 year ago
I think you should add more to your poem..... to me it feels like its a starting, but other that very good..
drkgbalakrishna More than 1 year ago
good
Nick More than 1 year ago
Talk about suppression of freedom of speech. Welcome to this forum. Everything I post awaits moderation. Poetry is not about that, dudes, learn it and get back with me!
Monica Harley More than 1 year ago
It is okay.
Nick More than 1 year ago
No clue!
Teresa Rosko More than 1 year ago
I agree, it really had no direction and was confusing.
Alexander Lim More than 1 year ago
No beginning and no end - simply a play of words.
Teresa Rosko More than 1 year ago
Sorry, I dont want to be dishonest, I personally just did not understand the first and the second sentence. I get the point of (if it is the point ) a second chance, perhaps not every first chance is the only first chance? Really not sure. Sorry if I have offended in any way.
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