My Muses-02-06
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My Muses-02-06
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There is only a moment born;
The one that has gone is reborn;
Me the dunce am numbering in vain;
The wheel is wheeling smooth an’ fine!
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There is only a moment born;
The one that has gone is reborn;
Me the dunce am numbering in vain;
The wheel is wheeling smooth an’ fine!
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Poetry.com 3.5 out of 5 based on 14 votes.
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humor abounds in verse
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great work awesome message
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My takeaway is a simple poem about the cycle of life / death and reincarnation whether it is spiritual or natural (it can be read on both levels). So it is complete and multifaceted. A lovely read. Please review my poem 'UNCOMMITTED COMMITMENT' I would welcome your comments / suggestions. Thank you!
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Nice .
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I like the short ones best
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Liked it.
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what more can I say?
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No clue!
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It is okay.
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It stimulates thought in a spinning way
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I feel it is not complete
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I think you should add more to your poem..... to me it feels like its a starting, but other that very good..
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No beginning and no end - simply a play of words.
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Sorry, I dont want to be dishonest, I personally just did not understand the first and the second sentence. I get the point of (if it is the point ) a second chance, perhaps not every first chance is the only first chance? Really not sure. Sorry if I have offended in any way.
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