Candles -N- Angels
by
Razon Santos
Candles and Angels
surrounding the founding fires
of desire
The sound of pounding hearts
in the dark
illuminates a spark of love
A soft touch
Warm finger tips
brushing gently against skin
A soft blown wind
in ears
from a disappearing kiss
in bliss
sends tingles
up and down spines
to find lips
entwined
The design of passion
casted on the shadows
dancing on walls
Calling names
Flickering flames
Too hot to tame
Ice dripping
Licking
Liquid quenching
off flesh
Sent to heaven
Candles and Angels
The light reflects us
A sweet essence
undressing eyes
to see inside hearts
starting to burn to wax
Lay down now...
Relax
I'll save you
After all
We're surrounded by
Candles and Angels...
surrounding the founding fires
of desire
The sound of pounding hearts
in the dark
illuminates a spark of love
A soft touch
Warm finger tips
brushing gently against skin
A soft blown wind
in ears
from a disappearing kiss
in bliss
sends tingles
up and down spines
to find lips
entwined
The design of passion
casted on the shadows
dancing on walls
Calling names
Flickering flames
Too hot to tame
Ice dripping
Licking
Liquid quenching
off flesh
Sent to heaven
Candles and Angels
The light reflects us
A sweet essence
undressing eyes
to see inside hearts
starting to burn to wax
Lay down now...
Relax
I'll save you
After all
We're surrounded by
Candles and Angels...
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Poetry.com 4.4 out of 5 based on 20 votes.
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the poem is passionated and warm, thank you
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angels are soothing beings
candles have soothing light
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Your words are like the warmth of ur touch.. Keep touching.. Very good..
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Few people write like this!
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Love....
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write on
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Vivid description
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gud 1
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such a warm feeling
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A nice one
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Well done
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very excellent form!
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This was a very romantic poem. I like how the ending added a sense of true romance.
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vivid and pretty hot stuff.
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That was very nice but I think it needs a little writing corrections on it
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The way you use short lines in this poem, I like it. Very well done.
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Men have attempted for eons to master the art of wooing their lovers. The stage you set provides not only a romantic setting, but the seduction is completed and consummated by your charming and disarming lines. What could possibly be more soothing than soft candles and radiant angels? Great job.
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beautiful personisation of candles.....!!
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romantic
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Very enchanting.
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