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Lament

Anguish and torment,
Sweetness and pleasure,
Ecstasy and agony,
Are what I’ve collected
In my poetry…
And with these words
I follow my life
So I may not sink into oblivion.
 
I implore you,
I beg of you,
Do not try to kill my words!
For my poems
Are meant to be read,
With a loud voice,
So the words and messages,
Can be heard far, far away,
With the purpose
To make sweeter
The honey of bitter life!
 
And if you will try
To kill my words,
I will leave
And you will remain
In the blackness of the night
Buried into oblivion.


Below is the French version at the request of poets on the site who can read it!


Soupir

Offrande et douleur
Douceur et plaisir
Extaze et agonie
C'est tous que j'ai mis
Dans mes poesies.....
C'est avec me mots- la
Que je poursuit ma vie
Pour aller plus loin
Que...........
L'oublie...........

S'il vous plait
Je vous en prie
N'essayez pas
De tuer mes mots ,
Car mes poesies
Sont a dire
A haut- voix
Pour entendre bien au- dela
Les mots
Et les messages
Ayant le bout de faire
Plus doux la miel
De la vie amer........

Et si vous penssez
Aussi essayer
Me tuer
J'aurais m'en aller
Tres loin
Et vous resterez
Dans le noir de la nuit
Et dans le grand
Oublie...

Copyright Doina M Mican
June 29th 2012
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David Cooper More than 1 year ago
I love the two versions: English and French.
Poetry.com 4.7 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 152 reviews.
Mashell Chapeyama More than 1 year ago
About poetry, its scope and its essence. Wonderful
Doina Mican More than 1 year ago
Thank you very much . Please give me the name of your poem to read it and review it
Doina Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Mihai Octavian Ratoi More than 1 year ago
I simply adore the way you write! Everything is so beautiful and well written!
doina More than 1 year ago
Thank you Mihai, I love you for your support !
Doina Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Doina Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
io More than 1 year ago
Beautiful!!!!
doina More than 1 year ago
thank you very much
Doina Mican More than 1 year ago
I never find your poem to write you nice review. please tell me name of your poem
Doina Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
El Angel More than 1 year ago
So beautifully write!
doina More than 1 year ago
Thank you me dear. I cannot write review, in this moment. many poets have the same problem.When will be possible (few hours ) I will read and review your poem.
Tj Hatton More than 1 year ago
Your words will never die, doina they stay in our hearts. TJ.
Doina Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Nice comments
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Nice comments
henra z More than 1 year ago
Well done... Exquisite piece
doina More than 1 year ago
thank you Henra ! We are so upset ! The site give us 15 min between 12 am and 12.20 am . What you can do in 15 min first ??? I try to post this poem from 3 days
Doina Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Kathryn Alley More than 1 year ago
Then to obliterate your Words- you give them life - So beautiful (((Hugs))) Kat
Doina Mican More than 1 year ago
Thank you very much Khatryn
Doina Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Doina Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Kat Alley More than 1 year ago
I love this Doina there are not enough stars in the sky to rate it Beautiful- Kat
Donka Krsteva More than 1 year ago
inspiration - out of joy or ache-has the power to reach far!! In my view, blessing ideas and thoughts can never, REALLY be destroyed.
doina More than 1 year ago
thank you Donka
Doina Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Nice comments
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Nice comments
Marentza More than 1 year ago
great poem
Doina Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Doina Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Rubab Jaffery More than 1 year ago
All gOod words need to be preserved for the coming generations and the dark times that lie ahead. (See? Your gOod little writing just brought out the philosopher in me! :)
doina More than 1 year ago
thank you so much . I love your work, but I CANNOT WRITE any review from 5 days !!!! I feel like I die !!!!!
Doina Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Vasandra Pantel More than 1 year ago
Artistic you are!
Doina Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Demetry Aniv More than 1 year ago
Great to read. Thanks for sharing
Doina Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Mike Keenan More than 1 year ago
Im new to this. Having read a great deal of work here, I was really captured by this piece.
Aethan Laetus More than 1 year ago
There is nothing more feared by a master of words than to have someone try and take your words from you.... You captured that fear and that drive to say what it is you have to say in this poem... I really felt your passion
doina More than 1 year ago
thank you so much
Doina Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Nice comments
Scott Morris More than 1 year ago
It sounds as though you're lashing out at someone or perhaps even yourself. Very good emotion.
doina More than 1 year ago
Thank you Scott,I will read your work
Doina Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Nice comments
Dale Raymond More than 1 year ago
Great poem! Once again, thanks for including the French. As always, I liked it better--the French is more expressive and more meaningful. This poem provokes thought. Excellent work!
doina More than 1 year ago
thank you so much Dale . I truly appreciate your review
Doina Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Pran Koul More than 1 year ago
Meaningful poetry is like the beacon of light, a great messenger, highly desirable in the prevailing darkness the is spread all over the world. Enjoyed the lines.
Doina Mican More than 1 year ago
Thank you very much Paul
Doina Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Kevin Jones More than 1 year ago
Very nice
Doina Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Raluca More than 1 year ago
I can feel your words
Doina Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Yeou-Cheng Ma More than 1 year ago
eloquent and succinct at the same time... how do you do it?
Vio L More than 1 year ago
A very very welll written poem! Amazing message and great choice of words!
doina More than 1 year ago
thank you so much
Doina Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Brandon Smithwrick More than 1 year ago
good work
doina More than 1 year ago
thank you
Doina Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Nice comments
Tracy Lee More than 1 year ago
I am new here - love your work. You inspire and speak to my heart.
doina More than 1 year ago
Thank you my dear Tracy, I will go and read your poem
Doina Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Nice comments
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Nice comments
Paula Figueroa More than 1 year ago
Nice
doina More than 1 year ago
thank you so much
Doina Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Nice comments
Sheri Moroe More than 1 year ago
very heart felt, I think many of us poets feel the same way, and by the way, awesome that you also wrote this in French. : )
Doina Mican More than 1 year ago
Thank you very much Sheri
Doina Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Paul Muresan More than 1 year ago
very well said! I love it !
doina More than 1 year ago
thank you so much
Doina Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
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