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Lament

Anguish and torment,
Sweetness and pleasure,
Ecstasy and agony,
Are what I’ve collected
In my poetry…
And with these words
I follow my life
So I may not sink into oblivion.
 
I implore you,
I beg of you,
Do not try to kill my words!
For my poems
Are meant to be read,
With a loud voice,
So the words and messages,
Can be heard far, far away,
With the purpose
To make sweeter
The honey of bitter life!
 
And if you will try
To kill my words,
I will leave
And you will remain
In the blackness of the night
Buried into oblivion.


Below is the French version at the request of poets on the site who can read it!


Soupir

Offrande et douleur
Douceur et plaisir
Extaze et agonie
C'est tous que j'ai mis
Dans mes poesies.....
C'est avec me mots- la
Que je poursuit ma vie
Pour aller plus loin
Que...........
L'oublie...........

S'il vous plait
Je vous en prie
N'essayez pas
De tuer mes mots ,
Car mes poesies
Sont a dire
A haut- voix
Pour entendre bien au- dela
Les mots
Et les messages
Ayant le bout de faire
Plus doux la miel
De la vie amer........

Et si vous penssez
Aussi essayer
Me tuer
J'aurais m'en aller
Tres loin
Et vous resterez
Dans le noir de la nuit
Et dans le grand
Oublie...

Copyright Doina M Mican
June 29th 2012
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David Cooper More than 1 year ago
I love the two versions: English and French.
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Mike Keenan More than 1 year ago
Im new to this. Having read a great deal of work here, I was really captured by this piece.
Yeou-Cheng Ma More than 1 year ago
eloquent and succinct at the same time... how do you do it?
Newton Kibiringi More than 1 year ago
this is such an encouraging write. enjoyed it big time
Vasandra Pantel More than 1 year ago
Artistic you are!
Doina Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
darylrobinson11 More than 1 year ago
Perfect poem
Doina Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
yvonne sensing More than 1 year ago
wonderful piece...
Doina Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Marissa More than 1 year ago
Great stuff
Doina Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Helen Garve More than 1 year ago
Beautiful
Doina Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Syed Vasif More than 1 year ago
wonderfully expressed
Doina Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Demetry Aniv More than 1 year ago
Great to read. Thanks for sharing
Doina Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Tai Jones More than 1 year ago
GREAT
Doina Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Lola Fernandez More than 1 year ago
Wonderful
Doina Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Sebastion douglas More than 1 year ago
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Doina Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Stephanie More than 1 year ago
nice
Doina Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Dawn Miller More than 1 year ago
well done
Doina Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
quantum photography More than 1 year ago
Sweet
Doina Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Diana More than 1 year ago
Beautiful
Doina Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Kevin Jones More than 1 year ago
Very nice
Doina Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Mike Maloney More than 1 year ago
Very Good!
Doina Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Nathan Brandon More than 1 year ago
this is quite amazing and ive tried to make a poem like this before but couldnt...also, thanks for going through and reviewing a lot of my poems...i appreciate...especaly from a poet as significant as you!
Doina Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Paul Harmon E. More than 1 year ago
you have amazing insight on poetry and writing ,
Doina Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
David Miller More than 1 year ago
Truly words from a poet
Doina Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Raluca More than 1 year ago
I can feel your words
Doina Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Pran Koul More than 1 year ago
Meaningful poetry is like the beacon of light, a great messenger, highly desirable in the prevailing darkness the is spread all over the world. Enjoyed the lines.
Doina Mican More than 1 year ago
Thank you very much Paul
Doina Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Andrea Mihaica More than 1 year ago
I love the poem in English and adore the one in French....mmm such a fluid language!
Doina Mican More than 1 year ago
Thank you very much Andrea
Doina Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
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