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Lament

Anguish and torment,
Sweetness and pleasure,
Ecstasy and agony,
Are what I’ve collected
In my poetry…
And with these words
I follow my life
So I may not sink into oblivion.
 
I implore you,
I beg of you,
Do not try to kill my words!
For my poems
Are meant to be read,
With a loud voice,
So the words and messages,
Can be heard far, far away,
With the purpose
To make sweeter
The honey of bitter life!
 
And if you will try
To kill my words,
I will leave
And you will remain
In the blackness of the night
Buried into oblivion.


Below is the French version at the request of poets on the site who can read it!


Soupir

Offrande et douleur
Douceur et plaisir
Extaze et agonie
C'est tous que j'ai mis
Dans mes poesies.....
C'est avec me mots- la
Que je poursuit ma vie
Pour aller plus loin
Que...........
L'oublie...........

S'il vous plait
Je vous en prie
N'essayez pas
De tuer mes mots ,
Car mes poesies
Sont a dire
A haut- voix
Pour entendre bien au- dela
Les mots
Et les messages
Ayant le bout de faire
Plus doux la miel
De la vie amer........

Et si vous penssez
Aussi essayer
Me tuer
J'aurais m'en aller
Tres loin
Et vous resterez
Dans le noir de la nuit
Et dans le grand
Oublie...

Copyright Doina M Mican
June 29th 2012
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David Cooper More than 1 year ago
I love the two versions: English and French.
Poetry.com 4.7 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 153 reviews.
Raluca More than 1 year ago
I can feel your words
Doina Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
William McLaurin More than 1 year ago
Continue to write.
Doina Mican More than 1 year ago
Thank you . It is what I do from 35 years :)
Doina Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Scott Morris More than 1 year ago
It sounds as though you're lashing out at someone or perhaps even yourself. Very good emotion.
doina More than 1 year ago
Thank you Scott,I will read your work
Doina Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Nice comments
Rubab Jaffery More than 1 year ago
All gOod words need to be preserved for the coming generations and the dark times that lie ahead. (See? Your gOod little writing just brought out the philosopher in me! :)
doina More than 1 year ago
thank you so much . I love your work, but I CANNOT WRITE any review from 5 days !!!! I feel like I die !!!!!
Doina Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Diana More than 1 year ago
Beautiful
Doina Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Demetry Aniv More than 1 year ago
Great to read. Thanks for sharing
Doina Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Robert R. Woods More than 1 year ago
I love poems that uses the art form to express ones experience in life... Love all the flavors of this piece... brilliant stuff.
doina More than 1 year ago
thank you my lovely friend Robert !
Robert R. Woods More than 1 year ago
Any time... D!
Doina Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Tracy Lee More than 1 year ago
I am new here - love your work. You inspire and speak to my heart.
doina More than 1 year ago
Thank you my dear Tracy, I will go and read your poem
Doina Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Nice comments
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Nice comments
Lavi Nia More than 1 year ago
As always your poems are very very well written! Great meaning & very in depth writing!You are a true poetess with an amazing talent.
doina More than 1 year ago
thank you so much
Doina Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
sara irizarry More than 1 year ago
these words def will out live you, so heartfelt. every line :) fantastic
Doina Mican More than 1 year ago
Thank you very much
Doina Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Syed Vasif More than 1 year ago
wonderfully expressed
Doina Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Mike Keenan More than 1 year ago
Im new to this. Having read a great deal of work here, I was really captured by this piece.
Patrick Herron More than 1 year ago
thanks
doina More than 1 year ago
Thank you so much Patrick , you are wonderful . I will read and review your poem soon the site let me do
Doina Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Nice comments
Marentza More than 1 year ago
great poem
Doina Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Doina Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Kathryn Alley More than 1 year ago
Then to obliterate your Words- you give them life - So beautiful (((Hugs))) Kat
Doina Mican More than 1 year ago
Thank you very much Khatryn
Doina Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Doina Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Kat Alley More than 1 year ago
I love this Doina there are not enough stars in the sky to rate it Beautiful- Kat
Dale Raymond More than 1 year ago
Great poem! Once again, thanks for including the French. As always, I liked it better--the French is more expressive and more meaningful. This poem provokes thought. Excellent work!
doina More than 1 year ago
thank you so much Dale . I truly appreciate your review
Doina Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Edward Willard More than 1 year ago
it is always so nice to return home and set down knowing that your work will always amaze me. You are a Beautiful person and it always shows in your work. Nicely done ms. Donia! Ed Willard
doina More than 1 year ago
thank you Edward. I'm so upset: I cannot write any review. I got 10 min last nite, enough to post this poem
Edward Willard More than 1 year ago
I see I havent missed much with all the problems. soon i am afraid i will loose contact with all of my poetry friends,. we all need to find away to stay connected I think. My email address is willarde@compassminerals.com or motoxrat58@yahoo.com if you ever want to drop me a line. I have very little faith in this site anymore and that is ashame.
Joyce Carol Gibson More than 1 year ago
Doina, I can no longer post or review and in some places where I try to comment it won't let me and it says my comment is awaiting moderation. How long have you been on this site?
doina More than 1 year ago
Joyce , how come Anne Van Orden she cam write nasty review to everybody . It is not strange ???
doina More than 1 year ago
Joyce , me and Gabi we are member from 2000 . It is first time when we have problem . I don't know what to say . Write me d_ mican@yahoo.com
Joyce Carol Gibson More than 1 year ago
The whole thing is strange. I went to google and asked how does poetry.com get paid. Interesting you should do that. I guess we are worthless to them and they probably want us to leave
doina More than 1 year ago
Joyce, please go check your email
Doina Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Pran Koul More than 1 year ago
Meaningful poetry is like the beacon of light, a great messenger, highly desirable in the prevailing darkness the is spread all over the world. Enjoyed the lines.
Doina Mican More than 1 year ago
Thank you very much Paul
Doina Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Brandon Smithwrick More than 1 year ago
good work
doina More than 1 year ago
thank you
Doina Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Nice comments
Ajay Rana More than 1 year ago
adorable
doina More than 1 year ago
thank you
Doina Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Nice comments
henra z More than 1 year ago
Well done... Exquisite piece
doina More than 1 year ago
thank you Henra ! We are so upset ! The site give us 15 min between 12 am and 12.20 am . What you can do in 15 min first ??? I try to post this poem from 3 days
Doina Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Vio L More than 1 year ago
A very very welll written poem! Amazing message and great choice of words!
doina More than 1 year ago
thank you so much
Doina Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Igor Sangin More than 1 year ago
Something special about this poem. Not like many others.
CatherineM More than 1 year ago
A cry to be heard!!
doina More than 1 year ago
thank you
Doina Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Doina Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Nice comments
David Miller More than 1 year ago
Truly words from a poet
Doina Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
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