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Knock- Haiku

Wind hits again
Heart beats fast again
woodpecker knocks.  

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Pauline Keown More than 1 year ago
keep it up
Divya Nishant Ranote More than 1 year ago
terse and telling.................pls. go through my poem 'true love is like this only' and suggest any.............thnx for the last reviews
Japleen Kaur More than 1 year ago
Confused. But Nice!!!
David Cobb More than 1 year ago
I don't care I love it anyways!
オスカーOsukā· イバラibara More than 1 year ago
well done
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Thanks
dust wordy More than 1 year ago
made me go back and read some haiku's by Bosha Kabata and Seishi Yamaguchi...nice
Michael Moore More than 1 year ago
Liking Haiku's atm.
Joyce Carol Gibson More than 1 year ago
Almost Haiku. Please don't be offended. Haiku has 5 syllables in first line, 7 in second and 5 in third. It never rhymes and is always about nature. Most people on this site do not care if it is about nature. This subject is perfect for Haiku. The word again should only be used once at the end of the line. This is easy to fix by adding The to the first line then second line something like my heart beats even faster. and start the third line with the. Most people here don't even know what Haiku is but this is perfectly haiku if the syllables are right. Great thoughts. I love it
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Thank you so much....Many a times even after knowing the rules you defy it. I am really happy that someone is ready to share the knowledge and information across this poetic forum. I appreciate and big thanks once again, God bless you.
Michael Moore More than 1 year ago
Awesome comment, Thanks for the teaching, I will keep it in mind the next Haiku I write to respect the art .:).
Joyce Carol Gibson More than 1 year ago
Thank you both. Some people would get nasty about it. You can go to your page and under the poem click on edit then make your change. Thanks for being appreciative.
george More than 1 year ago
4-6-4 is also acceptable though not as flexible
dust wordy More than 1 year ago
nice advice there...:)
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