Stranger In Paradise
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she calls my name
it makes me sad
I wish instead
she would call me Dad
The fairy tales
her mommy tell
i'm the villain
she's dear sweet nel
when she's grown
will she know
i'm her dad
and loved her so
it makes me sad
I wish instead
she would call me Dad
The fairy tales
her mommy tell
i'm the villain
she's dear sweet nel
when she's grown
will she know
i'm her dad
and loved her so
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Poetry.com 4.4 out of 5 based on 7 votes.
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Sad and beautiful
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Dad truely loves his daughter.
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touching, sounds like its a real experience
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it's simple yet very sentimental and it is full of love. Makes me want to tell my dad i love him more than ever:)
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so much said in only three short stanzas, it tells a whole story in itself!
great job, :)
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simple,terse,poignant,direct from heart and soul !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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need more work.
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