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Loving you

Loving you is like
Drinking acid
It burns my throat
Makes me sick
Eats at my insides
But when I hear ur words..
The pain goes away... 
Like water on a 
Lit up match
And I can't help but be happy you are there
Then sadness takes over 
Because I've only just realized
That you are not all mine...
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Poetry.com 3.8 out of 5 based on 4 votes.
Dustin Twiggs More than 1 year ago
A very free/open verse, and it flows so nice!
Gary Bégin More than 1 year ago
tough images of love
Anna Laurencio 8 months ago
great work. well done.
Cherie Young More than 1 year ago
touching
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