Our Love
by
Yvonne Cole
I am yours here
or there.
I will love you
most anywhere.
I'll be yours in
the car.
Wherever we go, here
we are.
I love you most in
the dark;
Because that is when,I'll
make my mark.
Our love is strong you
will see;
For if it's not I'll
let you be!
or there.
I will love you
most anywhere.
I'll be yours in
the car.
Wherever we go, here
we are.
I love you most in
the dark;
Because that is when,I'll
make my mark.
Our love is strong you
will see;
For if it's not I'll
let you be!
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hey dear friends...........my poem is just a way to express the feelings of two lovers..........just go through it.........i am sure it will work out truely if you are a true lover
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Poetry.com 3.8 out of 5 based on 28 votes.
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its really true feel that everyone of us goes wid it....
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good work you stuck to the subject it has rime very good thank you so much for the dream ...!
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Very well written.
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Its great...LOL yea make that mark alright. Im immature but i love the rhyme scheme! Make more poems like this-Ill read it! ;)
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I love it! That's all I can say. Keep writing!
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i love this please keep wrting more like this so good!
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i love it :D
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I LOVED THE FLOW AND THE MESSAGE. YOU HIT YOUR MARK AND YOU CAN BE PROUD! THIS IS A BEAUTIFUL DESCRIPTION ON LOVE AND FEELINGS!
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Almost Dr. Seuss like. Love this.
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Good message
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i like it its got alot of heart and meaning to it
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Love is still powerful even in it's simplest form
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nice though
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Your poem is a true seduction of words. Very charming and seductive in the beginning the speaker seem very soft and docile but the ending is very surprising.
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I like the simple verses..
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nice
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Very confident young lover, who vows to win her heart or, "let you be." Not the tradition ingredient for lasting love, but times change.
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You have successfully made a mark !
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I like certain parts of the poem
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I like this piece = the line breaks are really good - but I might have used more original language.
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Short and sweet
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sounds like something from dr suess. keep writing
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It was okay
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Nice little poem got lost a bit about 3/4 wa down but found its way again
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I like the poem
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