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Muddy waters still
Covering things beneath it
No reflection there
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Poetry.com 3.8 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 4 reviews.
Emile Pinet More than 1 year ago
Nicely put, well written with poetic flare. Nice flow of words attracting the reader with their simplicity and emotional impact resulting in a pleasant sounding poem with all the right syllable count. Good Job!
Carole More than 1 year ago
Thks Emile
george miehle More than 1 year ago
the water floats clear and all the rocks are showing their layers of mud
Carole More than 1 year ago
Your special George
tony right More than 1 year ago
nice no clear reflection from the crystal waters
Svetlana Rakhimova More than 1 year ago
I haven't read Haiku for some time. So, this was a fresh breath. However, it feels like the poem needs more refining. Thanks for sharing though. It's quite deep and produces an acute feeling of demand for clarity and transparency through the use of the words - "still", "waters", "reflection" and their contextual antonyms of "muddy", "covering ... beneath", and "no".
Carole More than 1 year ago
Ok then Svetlana. Thks for your comment.
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