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in the middle (study á la Sobin)

               ...our heart 
pulses, un-
 
remitting, quicker to slow and
stopping, but
not.
 
                    this moment
ineluctable,      will forever sear 
the backs of retinas, your-
 
self and
I
 
                are one.
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Matthew Bridgham More than 1 year ago
study a la Sobin
Poetry.com 4.2 out of 5 based on 10 votes.
Marwa Zaidan More than 1 year ago
Good job
Meg Lohman More than 1 year ago
love it!
Jamie Moore More than 1 year ago
cool
John Bridge More than 1 year ago
i get it dude
Audra Dwyer More than 1 year ago
But it is sinking in! Also, I looked at Sobin's stuff. I see the influence!
Jessica Martin More than 1 year ago
I see you are experimenting!
Roberto Flores More than 1 year ago
I like the EKG look to it, and the daring enjambment throughout. A poem like this could have me read and re-read looking for more meaning in case I missed it. Well done.
Isaac More than 1 year ago
Very nice and I don't even know who or what Sobin is Still tho niceee
Justin Shenk More than 1 year ago
I'm lost in the actual meaning
Toccata In F More than 1 year ago
Not. Try again!
Matthew Bridgham More than 1 year ago
Grow up.
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