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Life is not a game

Would my death bring peace, to mistakes that I've made?
I'd like to think I'm fine, that this is just a game...

Would my death bring peace, to those that I've lost trust?
I'd like to think they're fine, that I can clean the rust...

but life is not a game.
you have no control.
and if you go and cross the line,
all your friends will let go.



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Poetry.com 4.5 out of 5 based on 6 votes.
RAHEIMI kINSEY More than 1 year ago
Keep working
EVERYROADLEADS More than 1 year ago
Clever spin. Worded well. One error, though small...The word (controle) is spelled control
Edward Willard More than 1 year ago
Life is a blessing, some good some bad but we do have control so to speak. nicely done!
Tammie Blythe More than 1 year ago
While my opinion may be different that yours, your thoughts are well laid out.
tcipere More than 1 year ago
Clever
Jess Parker More than 1 year ago
I love the positive spin, refusal to be brought down
RAHEIMI kINSEY More than 1 year ago
I agree
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