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Lost Sky

Lost in the sky.
Breathing the air,
You can't count on things,
That are not there,
Surrounded by walls,
Trapped in time,
Caught up in words,
Turning to rhyme,
Consumed by sound,
Or feeling alone,
The darkness sets forth,
 A deeper tone...........................BAD-Mc..<3            
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Michael Gagain More than 1 year ago
nice writing style
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Enjoyed every word of it....................
Barbara DiLorenzo-McCormick More than 1 year ago
Thank you.............BAD-Mc..
Heinz Gerdes More than 1 year ago
I love your style and I love the mystery behind your words.
Barbara DiLorenzo-McCormick More than 1 year ago
Thank you ...BAD-Mc..
Jessica Russell More than 1 year ago
Loved it!!
Barbara DiLorenzo-McCormick More than 1 year ago
Thank you ... BAD-Mc..
Dyese More than 1 year ago
Nice and simple but has so much meaning in what you said.
Barbara DiLorenzo-McCormick More than 1 year ago
Thank you...BAD-Mc..
Janina Jayme More than 1 year ago
Love it...
Barbara DiLorenzo-McCormick More than 1 year ago
Thank you........ BAD-Mc..
Ajantha Selvarajan More than 1 year ago
A feel good poem
Matthew Murphy More than 1 year ago
The way this was presented was a awesomely done job! You maintained a perfect pace, As you applied a deeper and deeper; meaning as every word passed. I must ask one thing, What inspired you?
Barbara DiLorenzo-McCormick More than 1 year ago
God. inspires me............ Thank you so much for your kind comments.....BAD-Mc..,
Barbara DiLorenzo-McCormick More than 1 year ago
Zeus Hyatt More than 1 year ago
I really empathize with this feeling.. Short and to the point.
Barbara DiLorenzo-McCormick More than 1 year ago
Thank you .BAD-Mc..
Rob Cull More than 1 year ago
‎"A thousand imaginations Bouncing in one space of interaction, could create the possibility of the unimaginable to happen. by theory." -The incredible nocturnal poet R.C https://www.facebook.com/groups/174461116013965/ “Lost poets society”
Barbara DiLorenzo-McCormick More than 1 year ago
Thank you..............BAD-Mc..
Dustin Twiggs More than 1 year ago
and I love this part: Surrounded by walls, Trapped in time, Caught up in words, Turning to rhyme,
Barbara DiLorenzo-McCormick More than 1 year ago
Thank you.................BAD-Mc..
Alex Ahmad More than 1 year ago
i just loved the way you set up your feelings it is amazing you are really talented....keep on writing
Barbara DiLorenzo-McCormick More than 1 year ago
Thank you.............BAD-Mc..
Rîchård Açévédø More than 1 year ago
I love the flow, a smooth read with good thought form!
thomas jerry More than 1 year ago
I really liked it
Barbara DiLorenzo-McCormick More than 1 year ago
Thank myou...BAD-Mc.
Amy Mullison More than 1 year ago
I see you're not the only poet hell bent on self deprecation :) nice meter
Rose Greedy More than 1 year ago
Feeling trapped is the image I get considering the walls are present time traps some but time ticks and waits for no one nice imagery
Barbara DiLorenzo-McCormick More than 1 year ago
Thank you.......BAD-Mc..
Farmer Jackie More than 1 year ago
consumed by sound....
Marc French More than 1 year ago
Excellent poem..nice little twist at the end
Scott Graham More than 1 year ago
Caught up in words, Turning to rhyme,
Malgorzata Poliszczuk More than 1 year ago
good
Destiny Little More than 1 year ago
I enjoyed the feeling i get while reading it. Thanks for sharing! keep up the writing
Toccata In F More than 1 year ago
I do like this poem, but it's falling just a little short for me. Maybe it's the metrical format. I'm pretty sure I would enjoy this even more as free (or blank) verse. :)
Tom Kennedy More than 1 year ago
Ineed more metaphorical language.I do like the poem.
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