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Destiny

In the silence of my heart,
Heard only by me,
The pain sobs.
Eyes fill with tears,
And they seem willing,
To cry in agony !
Often they ask themselves :
What is a destiny ?
Fatality ?
A life lesson ?
Which if we not learn,
We're compelled to repeat,
When we least expect it !
 
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Poetry.com 4.8 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 119 reviews.
shama javkar More than 1 year ago
And this poem, brought tears in my eyes!!!
doina More than 1 year ago
thank you, xoxo
Doina Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Olga Shapiro More than 1 year ago
Very nice job
doina More than 1 year ago
thanks
Doina Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
William Klauck More than 1 year ago
You are very talented
doina More than 1 year ago
thank you
Doina Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
love it
doina More than 1 year ago
Xoxo
Doina Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Seema Ali More than 1 year ago
So true Diona! You are very right, this can happen,anywhere to anyone. Fatality ..if we are not ready to learn the lessons which life teachesus. Thanks a eye catcher you have here.
doina More than 1 year ago
thank you xoxo
Doina Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Robert R. Woods More than 1 year ago
The introspection is nice... I like the phrase: In the silence of my heart, Heard only by me, Nice image like the sound of one hand clapping... nice work.
doina More than 1 year ago
thank you
Doina Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Isaac Rodriguez More than 1 year ago
What if one is a destined repetition of a fatality.. either way reading ur great material is part of mine.
doina More than 1 year ago
thank you Isaac , xoxo
Doina Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Emma Naomi More than 1 year ago
It moved me!
doina More than 1 year ago
thank you
Doina Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Rob Cull More than 1 year ago
‎"A thousand imaginations Bouncing in one space of interaction, could create the possibility of the unimaginable to happen. by theory." -The incredible nocturnal poet R.C https://www.facebook.com/groups/174461116013965/ “Lost poets society”
doina More than 1 year ago
thanks
Doina Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
NINA More than 1 year ago
Beautiful and touching poem.
doina More than 1 year ago
xoxo
Doina Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Asia More than 1 year ago
I can relate to it now. Its so true. Beautiful poem
doina More than 1 year ago
thank you
Doina Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
ELIZABETH CHERNY More than 1 year ago
i like it.
doina More than 1 year ago
xoxo
Doina Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Randy Gray More than 1 year ago
destined to repeat.
doina More than 1 year ago
Xoxo
Kerry Sue More than 1 year ago
agreed
Doina Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Tj Hatton More than 1 year ago
Our lives fly on fragile wings of destiny. I like this poem.
doina More than 1 year ago
thanks xoxo
Doina Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Jerry Deitch More than 1 year ago
very moving and deep
doina More than 1 year ago
thank you
Doina Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Seth Lusk More than 1 year ago
Good message, and very nicely written.... I love reading your work :-)
doina More than 1 year ago
xoxo :)
Doina Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Jyrone Denny More than 1 year ago
Your poem rings true, my dear lady. A beautiful poem crying out in desperation for those ignorant souls who do not learn from the best teacher; life. An excellent and touching poem.
doina More than 1 year ago
thank you
Doina Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Hello More than 1 year ago
Love it!
doina More than 1 year ago
thank you
Doina Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Lavi Nia More than 1 year ago
I absolutely love this poem Doina. I believe, like you that Destiny = karmic lessons that keep on repeating themselves until we learn them! And that is the only way, we as human beings , evolve. Amazing! very well written!!!!
Divya Nishant Ranote More than 1 year ago
the one who speaks inside us does the karma only ............... nothing in our hands
Doina Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Daciana More than 1 year ago
Wonderful thought!
doina More than 1 year ago
thanks xoxo
Doina Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Merrill Auguste More than 1 year ago
I can feel and relate to this poem...it certainly left me thinking..love it If you have the time can you give me some advice on this piece http://www.poetry.com/poems/1108735-To-speak-of-love
Georgiana More than 1 year ago
nice poem
doina More than 1 year ago
thank xoxo
Doina Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Kat Alley More than 1 year ago
allied with pain can be a volatile mixture -a vicious cycle ensues- doomed to recreate past mistakes. Love your words always Doina- Kat
ex poet More than 1 year ago
it is morning in my country so good morning sweet kat or evening always good times
Doina Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Anna More than 1 year ago
Wow
doina More than 1 year ago
thank you
Doina Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Devi More than 1 year ago
wonderful
doina More than 1 year ago
thank you
Doina Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
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