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demon inside me

Come play,

Come see

Don't stay to long,

Deep inside locked away 

Theres a demon inside

He wants to play.

Give in I might

Melody plays in my head, I hear the voices.

Come now come all for the demon will take your soul. 
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Poetry.com 4.1 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 22 reviews.
Gary Gallegos More than 1 year ago
Beware the demon inside!
Hannah Coffman More than 1 year ago
nice

Sonja Carnes More than 1 year ago
Nicely done! 
Dips Lawati More than 1 year ago
every sec it comes real
Stanasia NoHeart More than 1 year ago
I am amazed by how this caught my attention. keep up the great work 
Yam-tin Martin Wong More than 1 year ago
"For the demon will take your soul". This game must be evil; but we don't know what it is. The temptations may be great and deciding whether one should do it or not may affect one's life and soul. "Each life is a challenging chess game. Once you make a move, it will not be the same."(my poem 'Life Is A Chess Game')
Mistie Abegg More than 1 year ago
Good thought provoking poem.
Windmill Person 11 months ago
Yes. I like it. 
alan wells More than 1 year ago
nice
Cheryl Bocksnick More than 1 year ago
:)
Andreas Simic 7 days ago
The mind games we play reflected in this poem.
Yassaman Johari More than 1 year ago
nice
Diksharth Dagar 29 days ago
beware of demon out and in
Olivia Stewart 9 months ago
I feel where your coming from

Amiadra Arrington More than 1 year ago
Nice work
Cornell Mack More than 1 year ago
nice
Richard Pogue More than 1 year ago
it's a job done.
Joseph Cambiaso More than 1 year ago
im still trying to get mine back from the last demon.
Aisha Ahmed More than 1 year ago
This is eloquently put together and it seems you have a natural talent for poetry. Keep up the good work. (:
Rajnish Mishra More than 1 year ago
there truly is a demon inside
V. Paul Hall More than 1 year ago
Poetry is not about spitting out spitting out words.  It is about saying something concisely and beautifully.  If your reader can not understand what you are saying, you are not communicating.  That is a two way street. 
Casiopia Casiopia More than 1 year ago
Imagination has no rules nor any limit,
and its totally normal to be incomprehensible 


Windmill Person 11 months ago
Yes. So meaningful. 
Bonzell Joins, Jr. 4 months ago
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