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Sundays without you

Sundays without you,
Are sad and lack in splendor.
And my heart beats no more,
As strongly as it used to!

In my head, soundless words
Whisper old promises.
Clinging onto memories,
My soul forever hopes.

Sundays now are umber.
My spirit - a barren sky,
Once a universe banzai,
Without you is lost in slumber.
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Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
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Ravi Kumar More than 1 year ago
read my poen its touch your heart
Poetry.com 4.6 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 259 reviews.
Siddharth Singh More than 1 year ago
Expressed
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Thank you for reviewing!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Bong Herbert Guitang More than 1 year ago
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Bong Herbert Guitang More than 1 year ago
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Tochukwu Esq More than 1 year ago
rare
Dale Raymond More than 1 year ago
Great and passionate poem. We are lucky to have you on this site.
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
And I am lucky to have you guys review my poems! Thank you!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Tochukwu Esq More than 1 year ago
great
Roland Joita More than 1 year ago
love the last stanza!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Glad you do, thank you!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
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Bong Herbert Guitang More than 1 year ago
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Tochukwu Esq More than 1 year ago
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Jande Jande More than 1 year ago
incredible feelings.I love it.
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Thank you very much!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Bong Herbert Guitang More than 1 year ago
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Tochukwu Esq More than 1 year ago
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David Miller More than 1 year ago
Liked very much
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you very much
Bong Herbert Guitang More than 1 year ago
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Tochukwu Esq More than 1 year ago
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Simon Elliott More than 1 year ago
those bleak days of solitude when there´s little else to do but ponder on our loved ones. And the fact they are not with us.
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Indeed! Thanks for the review Simon!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Nice comments
Llurick Brown More than 1 year ago
I like it, keep up the good work.
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Thanks Llurick, I'll do my best! :)
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Nice comments
Tochukwu Esq More than 1 year ago
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Massiel Cardenas More than 1 year ago
You are living the poetry my friend... Love this poem!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Thank you Massiel, glad you love it!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Nice comments
Tochukwu Esq More than 1 year ago
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Chris Nicola More than 1 year ago
Well-written. Deep stuff
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Thank you Chris!
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Nice comments
Bong Herbert Guitang More than 1 year ago
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Tochukwu Esq More than 1 year ago
great
Jessica Bernard More than 1 year ago
I have been struggling about Sundays with out my fiance for 11 years. With him they were real I was thinking. We would truly take it as a day of rest. Here back in Vermont they are so structured feeling and more cold, with out a lot of love or comfort.
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Thank you for the review. It's always hard without love.
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Nice comments
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Nice comments
Tochukwu Esq More than 1 year ago
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Mehnaz Abdul Assis More than 1 year ago
Loved it! Very nice poem and it is worth giving 5 stars!! :D keep it up!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Thank you Mehnaz!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Bong Herbert Guitang More than 1 year ago
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Tochukwu Esq More than 1 year ago
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Sajad Wani More than 1 year ago
Really moving :)
Mel Bautista More than 1 year ago
thanks for this. great read. very profound. I'll be glad if you review mine too :))
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Thank you Mel!
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Nice comments
Bong Herbert Guitang More than 1 year ago
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Bong Herbert Guitang More than 1 year ago
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Tochukwu Esq More than 1 year ago
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Faheem Jawaid More than 1 year ago
Wonderful expressions indeed.
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Thank you Faheem!
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Nice comments
Bong Herbert Guitang More than 1 year ago
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Tochukwu Esq More than 1 year ago
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Silviu More than 1 year ago
truly liked it
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Glad you do, thanks!
Joyce Carol Gibson More than 1 year ago
Just publishing it again
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Bong Herbert Guitang More than 1 year ago
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Tochukwu Esq More than 1 year ago
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Joyce Carol Gibson More than 1 year ago
This is heart wrenching. I can feel deep pain in your words. great expression
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Thank you very much Joyce!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Nice comments
Tochukwu Esq More than 1 year ago
rare
Khalil Goddard More than 1 year ago
and clever too. "In my head, soundless words Whisper old promises. " A masterful line, brilliant.
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Thank you very much Khalil
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Bong Herbert Guitang More than 1 year ago
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Tochukwu Esq More than 1 year ago
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Lavi Nia More than 1 year ago
I love it:) simple, sad but deep. As always you have a great choice of words!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Thank you so much Lavi!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Nice comments
Tochukwu Esq More than 1 year ago
great
Seth Lusk More than 1 year ago
I always love your choice of words man.... Great work!!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Thanks a lot Seth!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Tochukwu Esq More than 1 year ago
great
Carme Ardito More than 1 year ago
This is my favorite!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Glad you like it, thank you!
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Nice comments
Bong Herbert Guitang More than 1 year ago
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Tochukwu Esq More than 1 year ago
rare
Rosa Ciocca More than 1 year ago
It sounds like you are missing someone who was very special to you. You expressed it in a beautiful way :D
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Thanks for reading 7 reviewing Rosa!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Bong Herbert Guitang More than 1 year ago
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Tochukwu Esq More than 1 year ago
rare
Stephen Hector More than 1 year ago
Cool.. very original
Bong Herbert Guitang More than 1 year ago
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Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Thank you Stephen!
Bong Herbert Guitang More than 1 year ago
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Tochukwu Esq More than 1 year ago
great
Laura Halbrader More than 1 year ago
It pours out from your poem. I can feel your pain through your words. Excellent
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Thank you for reviewing my poem Laura!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Tochukwu Esq More than 1 year ago
great
Mihai Octavian Ratoi More than 1 year ago
Love and passion! a great poem!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Thanks Mihai!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Nice comments
Tochukwu Esq More than 1 year ago
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Patrick Herron More than 1 year ago
glad to see you on top ,though i would have to write another stupid william john poem i was going to call.. SCRAMBLED POET HO: have have and egg,egg ho have have a pan, pan ho must must crack, crack ho must must scramble, scrambled ho remember his on sunday
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Thank you for the review Patrick!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Nice comments
Tochukwu Esq More than 1 year ago
great
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