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Sundays without you

Sundays without you,
Are sad and lack in splendor.
And my heart beats no more,
As strongly as it used to!

In my head, soundless words
Whisper old promises.
Clinging onto memories,
My soul forever hopes.

Sundays now are umber.
My spirit - a barren sky,
Once a universe banzai,
Without you is lost in slumber.
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Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
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Ravi Kumar More than 1 year ago
read my poen its touch your heart
Poetry.com 4.6 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 261 reviews.
Mehnaz Abdul Assis More than 1 year ago
Loved it! Very nice poem and it is worth giving 5 stars!! :D keep it up!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Thank you Mehnaz!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Bong Herbert Guitang More than 1 year ago
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Tochukwu Esq More than 1 year ago
rare
Maria Mestanza More than 1 year ago
yur very talented
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Thank you Maria! Glad you like it!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Tochukwu Esq More than 1 year ago
great
First Last More than 1 year ago
great stuff - keep up the good work
First Last More than 1 year ago
wonderful
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Thank you for the review!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Bong Herbert Guitang More than 1 year ago
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Tochukwu Esq More than 1 year ago
rare
Hatim Mustafa More than 1 year ago
You've punt in allot into your poem...good read
Kerry Sue More than 1 year ago
its beautiful
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Glad you liked it, thank you!
Kerry Sue More than 1 year ago
great read
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Nice comments
Tochukwu Esq More than 1 year ago
great
Patrick Herron More than 1 year ago
glad to see you on top ,though i would have to write another stupid william john poem i was going to call.. SCRAMBLED POET HO: have have and egg,egg ho have have a pan, pan ho must must crack, crack ho must must scramble, scrambled ho remember his on sunday
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Thank you for the review Patrick!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Nice comments
Tochukwu Esq More than 1 year ago
great
Carme Ardito More than 1 year ago
This is my favorite!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Glad you like it, thank you!
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Nice comments
Bong Herbert Guitang More than 1 year ago
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Tochukwu Esq More than 1 year ago
rare
Jessica Schladt More than 1 year ago
Perfect
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Much appreciated, thanks Jessica!
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Nice comments
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Nice comments
Bong Herbert Guitang More than 1 year ago
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Tochukwu Esq More than 1 year ago
rare
Yosri Sallam More than 1 year ago
I salute you .
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Thank you very much Yosri!
Kerry Sue More than 1 year ago
its great work
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Nice comments
Tochukwu Esq More than 1 year ago
rare
The Refined Poet More than 1 year ago
This is a great write!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Thank you for the review!
First Last More than 1 year ago
i'll say so
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Bong Herbert Guitang More than 1 year ago
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Tochukwu Esq More than 1 year ago
rare
Larry Stallings More than 1 year ago
powerful
Kerry Sue More than 1 year ago
loved it
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Thanks for the review Larry.
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Nice comments
Tochukwu Esq More than 1 year ago
great
yakov kantarovich More than 1 year ago
Love it
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Glad you do, thank you!
Kerry Sue More than 1 year ago
awesome job great work loved the read
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Nice comments
Tochukwu Esq More than 1 year ago
rare
Faheem Jawaid More than 1 year ago
Wonderful expressions indeed.
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Thank you Faheem!
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Nice comments
Bong Herbert Guitang More than 1 year ago
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Tochukwu Esq More than 1 year ago
rare
Gary John More than 1 year ago
Such a beauty and passion . Love it
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Thanks for the review Gary, glad you like it!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Nice comments
Tochukwu Esq More than 1 year ago
rare
clifton redmond More than 1 year ago
brilliant use of words, pure class
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Thanks a lot Clifton!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Tochukwu Esq More than 1 year ago
rare
David Miller More than 1 year ago
Liked very much
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you very much
Bong Herbert Guitang More than 1 year ago
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Tochukwu Esq More than 1 year ago
rare
Sajad Wani More than 1 year ago
Really moving :)
sarah park More than 1 year ago
Just perfect
Bong Herbert Guitang More than 1 year ago
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Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Thank you Sarah!
Bong Herbert Guitang More than 1 year ago
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Tochukwu Esq More than 1 year ago
great
Dale Raymond More than 1 year ago
Great and passionate poem. We are lucky to have you on this site.
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
And I am lucky to have you guys review my poems! Thank you!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Tochukwu Esq More than 1 year ago
great
Jessica Bernard More than 1 year ago
I have been struggling about Sundays with out my fiance for 11 years. With him they were real I was thinking. We would truly take it as a day of rest. Here back in Vermont they are so structured feeling and more cold, with out a lot of love or comfort.
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Thank you for the review. It's always hard without love.
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Nice comments
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Nice comments
Tochukwu Esq More than 1 year ago
rare
Simon Elliott More than 1 year ago
those bleak days of solitude when there´s little else to do but ponder on our loved ones. And the fact they are not with us.
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Indeed! Thanks for the review Simon!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Nice comments
Angela Belanger More than 1 year ago
wow nice
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Thank you Angela!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Bong Herbert Guitang More than 1 year ago
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Tochukwu Esq More than 1 year ago
great
Jacob Tyler More than 1 year ago
This could apply to so many persons in my life good job
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Thanks a lot for taking the time to review this!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Joyce Carol Gibson More than 1 year ago
love it
Bong Herbert Guitang More than 1 year ago
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Tochukwu Esq More than 1 year ago
rare
Daciana More than 1 year ago
Very emotional!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Thank you Daciana, glad you like it!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Tochukwu Esq More than 1 year ago
rare
Raluca More than 1 year ago
So emotional and deep
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Thanks a lot!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Bong Herbert Guitang More than 1 year ago
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Tochukwu Esq More than 1 year ago
rare
Howard mitchell More than 1 year ago
Congrats
Tochukwu Esq More than 1 year ago
great
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Thanks Howard!
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