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Sundays without you

Sundays without you,
Are sad and lack in splendor.
And my heart beats no more,
As strongly as it used to!

In my head, soundless words
Whisper old promises.
Clinging onto memories,
My soul forever hopes.

Sundays now are umber.
My spirit - a barren sky,
Once a universe banzai,
Without you is lost in slumber.
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Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
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Ravi Kumar More than 1 year ago
read my poen its touch your heart
Poetry.com 4.6 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 258 reviews.
Yosri Sallam More than 1 year ago
I salute you .
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Thank you very much Yosri!
Kerry Sue More than 1 year ago
its great work
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Nice comments
Tochukwu Esq More than 1 year ago
rare
Larry Stallings More than 1 year ago
powerful
Kerry Sue More than 1 year ago
loved it
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Thanks for the review Larry.
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Nice comments
Tochukwu Esq More than 1 year ago
great
Gary John More than 1 year ago
Such a beauty and passion . Love it
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Thanks for the review Gary, glad you like it!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Nice comments
Tochukwu Esq More than 1 year ago
rare
David Miller More than 1 year ago
Liked very much
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you very much
Bong Herbert Guitang More than 1 year ago
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Tochukwu Esq More than 1 year ago
rare
Jessica Schladt More than 1 year ago
Perfect
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Much appreciated, thanks Jessica!
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Nice comments
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Nice comments
Bong Herbert Guitang More than 1 year ago
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Tochukwu Esq More than 1 year ago
rare
yakov kantarovich More than 1 year ago
Love it
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Glad you do, thank you!
Kerry Sue More than 1 year ago
awesome job great work loved the read
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Nice comments
Tochukwu Esq More than 1 year ago
rare
Hatim Mustafa More than 1 year ago
You've punt in allot into your poem...good read
Kerry Sue More than 1 year ago
its beautiful
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Glad you liked it, thank you!
Kerry Sue More than 1 year ago
great read
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Nice comments
Tochukwu Esq More than 1 year ago
great
Dawn Miller More than 1 year ago
Ya keep writing bud
Bong Herbert Guitang More than 1 year ago
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Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Thanks Dawn!
Bong Herbert Guitang More than 1 year ago
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Tochukwu Esq More than 1 year ago
great
Alina More than 1 year ago
My spirit-a barren sky...soo poetic!!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Glad you liked it, thank you Alina!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Nice comments
Tochukwu Esq More than 1 year ago
great
doina More than 1 year ago
I remember this feeling quite well. Wonderful poem
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Thank you! :)
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Nice comments
Tochukwu Esq More than 1 year ago
rare
clifton redmond More than 1 year ago
brilliant use of words, pure class
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Thanks a lot Clifton!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Tochukwu Esq More than 1 year ago
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Stephanie More than 1 year ago
Love this one too
Bong Herbert Guitang More than 1 year ago
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Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Thank you Stephanie!
Bong Herbert Guitang More than 1 year ago
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Tochukwu Esq More than 1 year ago
great
Jarett Burns More than 1 year ago
Good
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Thank you Jarett!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Bong Herbert Guitang More than 1 year ago
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Tochukwu Esq More than 1 year ago
rare
Nick Tamborra More than 1 year ago
What an amazing masterful poet you truly are
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
I appreciate your kind words, thank you!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Bong Herbert Guitang More than 1 year ago
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Bong Herbert Guitang More than 1 year ago
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Tochukwu Esq More than 1 year ago
rare
First Last More than 1 year ago
great stuff - keep up the good work
First Last More than 1 year ago
wonderful
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Thank you for the review!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Bong Herbert Guitang More than 1 year ago
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Tochukwu Esq More than 1 year ago
rare
Jessica Bernard More than 1 year ago
I have been struggling about Sundays with out my fiance for 11 years. With him they were real I was thinking. We would truly take it as a day of rest. Here back in Vermont they are so structured feeling and more cold, with out a lot of love or comfort.
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Thank you for the review. It's always hard without love.
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Nice comments
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Nice comments
Tochukwu Esq More than 1 year ago
rare
Dale Raymond More than 1 year ago
Great and passionate poem. We are lucky to have you on this site.
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
And I am lucky to have you guys review my poems! Thank you!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Tochukwu Esq More than 1 year ago
great
Simon Elliott More than 1 year ago
those bleak days of solitude when there´s little else to do but ponder on our loved ones. And the fact they are not with us.
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Indeed! Thanks for the review Simon!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Nice comments
Ryliam Southae More than 1 year ago
Well done. I admire this piece.
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Much appreciated, thank you!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Bong Herbert Guitang More than 1 year ago
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Tochukwu Esq More than 1 year ago
rare
Reshma Sivashankar More than 1 year ago
SHORT AND EFFICIENTLY EXPRESSIVE!! I STILL NEED TO RECOVER!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Thank you very much for the review Reshma!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Tochukwu Esq More than 1 year ago
rare
dana vanca More than 1 year ago
Sunday should be out of the week!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Thanks a lot Dana!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Nice comments
Bong Herbert Guitang More than 1 year ago
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Tochukwu Esq More than 1 year ago
great
Maria Mestanza More than 1 year ago
yur very talented
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Thank you Maria! Glad you like it!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Tochukwu Esq More than 1 year ago
great
Mehnaz Abdul Assis More than 1 year ago
Loved it! Very nice poem and it is worth giving 5 stars!! :D keep it up!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Thank you Mehnaz!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Bong Herbert Guitang More than 1 year ago
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Tochukwu Esq More than 1 year ago
rare
Roland Joita More than 1 year ago
love the last stanza!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Glad you do, thank you!
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Bong Herbert Guitang More than 1 year ago
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Tochukwu Esq More than 1 year ago
rare
Silviu More than 1 year ago
truly liked it
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
Glad you do, thanks!
Joyce Carol Gibson More than 1 year ago
Just publishing it again
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
thank you
Bong Herbert Guitang More than 1 year ago
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Tochukwu Esq More than 1 year ago
rare
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