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I'm Finally Over You

The first time I saw you
I remember it all so clear
It was the first time I felt love
And the first I felt real fear
I wanted to let you know how I felt
But I was to scared to tell
So I backed out every chance I had
And put my mind through h***
Finally everything worked out, I told you how I felt
Despite my fears when you said yes, you made my heart melt
I remember holding you in the theatre as we watched the world end
Kissing you goodnight and praying it would never end
But girl, you took my heart and you tore it apart
Almost went crazy thinking what do I do
Then I got over it and realized I don't need you
I loved you, but you tore me up inside
I cherished you, and I can't believe how much I cried
Took me a long time to realize what I do
I need food, I need water, I need love
But girl, I don't need you
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Poetry.com 4.3 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 16 reviews.
Janina Jayme More than 1 year ago
Strong and positive but gentle.
Prafulla More than 1 year ago
You deserve much better.....keep up the good work
Sherea Buford More than 1 year ago
This was great is something I feel everyone can relate to at one point. Great write :)
ARUN MAZUMDER More than 1 year ago
Divya Nishant Ranote More than 1 year ago
masterpiece bro
Ajantha Selvarajan More than 1 year ago
well communicated
Rose Blundell More than 1 year ago
It was so perfect great ending too
Kerry Sue More than 1 year ago
good write
Marcus T. Johnson More than 1 year ago
this is just very impressively written, minor things that i personally wasn't a fan of but you really put this all together so nicely. I loved it
Liz Fraser More than 1 year ago
I can definitely feel the love and loss in this poem, good communication skills!
Belinda Pieterse More than 1 year ago
I also really like the ending...it's like...in your face chick !
Andy Honrado More than 1 year ago
I can relate!
Albert Dowell More than 1 year ago
it flowed well. Please review my poems and also go to www.facebook.com/PoemsByAL and “Like” my page. Thanks.
Marama Kelly More than 1 year ago
hahaha, I like this. I like the imagery your words have painted of a love that turns out to be anything but the next best thing. In fact the true colors come through and you soon find that what was on the outside was not on the inside. This is well expressed and gives the reader a clear view of the theme you are portraying of unevenly yoked love. Well done.
Anonymous More than 1 year ago
lots of emotion in it
Jaclyn Godfrey More than 1 year ago
I liked the first half, but the second half just seemed to loose the flow.
Brian McConville More than 1 year ago
ooGd poem
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