THE END
Take me, hold me, leave me
Cold, dark, rain
Always the same
Destruction, fatal
Go away, come to me
Forever, I need you
Consume me, I consume you
Let's go down together
You hold, I sink with you in my soul
destructed, empty
It's the end.
Cold, dark, rain
Always the same
Destruction, fatal
Go away, come to me
Forever, I need you
Consume me, I consume you
Let's go down together
You hold, I sink with you in my soul
destructed, empty
It's the end.
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Poetry.com 3 out of 5 based on 5 votes.
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It almost reminds me of a TOOL song..
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ok
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this writer seems troubled i think
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Good start, but a little choppy. Would love to see this filled out into some lyrics and chorus. Like the imagery and feeling.
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rather than the end !
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