Life and Time
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‘Life’ while enquired of ‘Time’,
“Why so much in hurry and always busy ?”
‘Time’ replied with a smile –
“There lies justification
In all its fairness and all the while.”
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Poetry.com 3.4 out of 5 based on 7 votes.
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Nice work
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I like the way have have written this idea but im a little lost at the end as to what you exactly mean. You have me curious as i like to think about existence. My bad for not understanding your wavelength.
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Life 'once' enquired?
last line is onerous
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Think I might be a bit too ignorant for this
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GOOD
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fair comments.
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