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Unwell to the station.

Unwell to the station.
Each step a kick in the backside.
Each drop of rain an insult.
Screaming and denying me relief.
Other pedestrians walk in my way.
Blocking me like the rain.
My stomach turns painfully.
My night of mulling over dilemmas
has left a bitter taste even morning coffee
couldn´t wash out.
This dark day and it´s unknown outcome
has all of my faith.
Despite the torture of a monster morning,
atleast I got a seat on the train.
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Poetry.com 4.5 out of 5 based on 11 votes.
Gino Valentine More than 1 year ago
Excellent Wording
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
and very sad, but excellent written
Simon Elliott More than 1 year ago
Thanks Gabriel you are one of the poets that really shares your feelings, I think it´s so important in this site to be like that.
doina More than 1 year ago
Very descriptive feeling
Simon Elliott More than 1 year ago
Thanks Doina your comment was well appreciated.
Divya Nishant Ranote More than 1 year ago
and ofcourse real poet
Simon Elliott More than 1 year ago
Thankyou so much I love poetry as you do!
Laura Halbrader More than 1 year ago
such imagery. I felt as if I was there, inside of your mind.
Simon Elliott More than 1 year ago
Thankyou Laura it´s so good to have your comments.
Tj Hatton More than 1 year ago
Simon.
Simon Elliott More than 1 year ago
Thanks Tj you are a fellow poet who writes well I´ve always got time for you.
Ludy Bührs More than 1 year ago
expressed very well
Simon Elliott More than 1 year ago
Thanks for rating my stuff, you´ve been incredibly supportive of me.
george miehle More than 1 year ago
small comforts
Simon Elliott More than 1 year ago
Thanks George your riddles always intrigue me.
Alan Green 'Guppyman' More than 1 year ago
the poet speaks of a soul not well
Brian Blundell More than 1 year ago
realy good
Simon Elliott More than 1 year ago
Thanks Brian I´m glad you like it.
Dan More than 1 year ago
Not bad. I think I like it.
Simon Elliott More than 1 year ago
Thankyou very much.
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