smile
see this smile on my face it's a fake,
FAKE like the the way you look at me and say you love me,
so i walk around pretending that we are doing well,
tho inside my heart is brakeing,
all i want to do is cry and skreem out,
you don't realy love me you only seem to love,
love me what you want something,
so see this smile on me face it's not for you,
it's for world to see,
only to make them think i'm happy
see this smile on my face it's not the real,
like I'm not the real me,
see this smile it's fake just like the rest of me,
so face that i'm afraid of the realy,
fake face fake smile fake man
FAKE like the the way you look at me and say you love me,
so i walk around pretending that we are doing well,
tho inside my heart is brakeing,
all i want to do is cry and skreem out,
you don't realy love me you only seem to love,
love me what you want something,
so see this smile on me face it's not for you,
it's for world to see,
only to make them think i'm happy
see this smile on my face it's not the real,
like I'm not the real me,
see this smile it's fake just like the rest of me,
so face that i'm afraid of the realy,
fake face fake smile fake man
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this was about me x she was playing a game but in the end i got out
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Poetry.com 3.8 out of 5 based on 6 votes.
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Very good writing skills take care with typos
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It wasn't a true relationship on her side and maybe your as all was fake
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I get where you're coming from. its sad there are people our there like this.
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Well, dear...while I'm happy you putting your heart into it,please take care of the grammars.
And vocabularies; use many more terms about fake; impostor, façade, two-faced, behind the smile.
out of curiosity, what does the number 9 refer to, or meant to be?
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Like the subject matter, however, because of misspelling or mistyping, not sure which, some lines were a bit confusing. I like the emotion it conveys though.
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Good work
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