Honeysuckle
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Blooms are found on many vines
along our country road.
At night, if I did not know better, I
would sucpect a perfume manufacturer had
opened a factory nearby.
I am, in my mind, a boy again, plucking
the tubular blooms,
breaking off the back ends,
pulling stamens through;
Nature's swrrt necter gleefully sucking!
along our country road.
At night, if I did not know better, I
would sucpect a perfume manufacturer had
opened a factory nearby.
I am, in my mind, a boy again, plucking
the tubular blooms,
breaking off the back ends,
pulling stamens through;
Nature's swrrt necter gleefully sucking!
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Poetry.com 4.2 out of 5 based on 5 votes.
Written with love, but just need a little working with sentence structure.
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Wonderful Prose. Watch Your Spelling.
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it is a nice poem !
but if you pay attention to your spelling mistakes it will be better !
Sophy Chen 苏菲
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Great descriptions. Very cool poem!
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can we say the child inside is alive and vibrant
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