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Trying to die.

Trying to die.


Can you help me please I'm trying

can you tell me why I'm trying

can you fix things please I'm trying

can you find a way I'm trying

can I always be this way I'm trying

can I come back one day I'm trying

can I stop it if I pray I'm trying

can I change this day I'm trying

can I live this way I'm trying

can I dream it away I'm trying

can you hold me in your arms I'm dying.
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Himalaya Luitel More than 1 year ago
i hav seen an english poem like this for the first time
Alan Green 'Guppyman' More than 1 year ago
the poet tells of a souls demise
Jade More than 1 year ago
^^
Huberta van Akkeren More than 1 year ago
I'm not sure if this is about trying to live or trying to die...both side of the same coin eventually
Toccata In F More than 1 year ago
Now match the rest of the poem to that! Good work! :)
Michael Bath More than 1 year ago
YES YOU CAN
A Soul More than 1 year ago
carry on trying
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