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So i will fade away
Like sand falling through water
at first it will seem like to much
time will pass and it will disperse
till the tiniest of grains are left
then even they're forgotten 
Just a fuzzy memory of a face remains

 
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Corey Haddock More than 1 year ago
It's about how easily someone fades from memory. I was thinking of my Dad when i wrote this. I am quite disappointed with how it turned out.
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Rah Ne More than 1 year ago
love the way you write with a flow, but spelling and punctuations help a great deal. commas! and too* =)
Corey Haddock More than 1 year ago
I realize that now I've really been working on grammar and what not .
james pizzimenti More than 1 year ago
at first it will seem like too much
Corey Haddock More than 1 year ago
I like this.
Kathreen Margaret More than 1 year ago
Life improves . . .
Corey Haddock More than 1 year ago
71 days later is has gotten worse. I am not so sure it will ever improve.
Carema S. More than 1 year ago
great work
Corey Haddock More than 1 year ago
Thanks, though i am very disappointed the way this one turned out.
DAVID MACON More than 1 year ago
good flow
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