Dilemma...of bonds.
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It's at this crossroads,
That we take a decision,
Either to fall in with passion,
Or bear heavy, cumbersome loads.
That we take a decision,
Either to fall in with passion,
Or bear heavy, cumbersome loads.
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Poetry.com 3.9 out of 5 based on 7 votes.
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feels real passonate about the subject and holds a true meaning
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Great! A good message delivered through four lines.
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Nice
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Nicely said in few words.
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short but powerful.this 4 lined poet niche you have created for yourself is sure working for you.like the end rhyme too.(ABBA)
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What a large and weighty idea for such few words. Lovely. I may reword "take" to "make" and I may wish to make "crossroads" into the singular form "crossroad". Then I will come back and give it 5 stars because I really love this idea for a poem.
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I think this poem says a lot, but I believe that more could be wriiten to give the public more information to digest and enjoy.
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