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Dilemma...of bonds.

It's at this crossroads,
That we take a decision,
Either to fall in with passion,
Or bear heavy, cumbersome loads.
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Poetry.com 3.7 out of 5 based on 9 votes.
Suzanne Feldschmied More than 1 year ago
What a large and weighty idea for such few words. Lovely. I may reword "take" to "make" and I may wish to make "crossroads" into the singular form "crossroad". Then I will come back and give it 5 stars because I really love this idea for a poem.
Oluwaseunfunmi Elijah Agbaje More than 1 year ago
yea, it's like so in my original..jus' tweaked it.
Surhdique Adeogun More than 1 year ago
short but powerful.this 4 lined poet niche you have created for yourself is sure working for you.like the end rhyme too.(ABBA)
Oluwaseunfunmi Elijah Agbaje More than 1 year ago
You see!
Melissa Darnaby More than 1 year ago
Nice
Oluwaseunfunmi Elijah Agbaje More than 1 year ago
It is.
Barbara Cadogan More than 1 year ago
Nicely said in few words.
Oluwaseunfunmi Elijah Agbaje More than 1 year ago
#4LINES ma'am
Shalini Bisht More than 1 year ago
Great! A good message delivered through four lines.
Oluwaseunfunmi Elijah Agbaje More than 1 year ago
Aye!
James More than 1 year ago
feels real passonate about the subject and holds a true meaning
Yvonne's Poetry More than 1 year ago
i agree
Anjam Abbas More than 1 year ago
nice
Jeffrey Furtado More than 1 year ago
I think this poem says a lot, but I believe that more could be wriiten to give the public more information to digest and enjoy.
Oluwaseunfunmi Elijah Agbaje More than 1 year ago
awww..#4LINES mate
Portia Janae Brown More than 1 year ago
but hey everyone is creative in ther own right
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