Poseidon’s Kiss
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Dear Grecian god of the sea
Alas! You stole his heart from me
A sailor’s quest, a distant shore
A maiden’s despair forever more
How can I compare thy soul to thee
Tempestuous mistress of the sea
Captivating a man’s deepest desire
To seek adventures, a lady’s mire
d*mn Poseidon of the deep!
Seducing man, as widow’s weep
Whispering within their ear
“The love of the sea is ever near”
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Poetry.com 4.7 out of 5 based on 24 votes.
Seems like a wet kiss, lol
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.stay stronq !! kia kaha , death is lifes only promise whether its by sea or on land its hard to accept and some cant bare the pain , but stay strong for him xo.
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I lovedd it
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You can actually feel the words.....
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I love it!
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REALLY INTERESTING AND I LOVE THE RHYMING SCHEME
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An excellent poem indeed.
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i loved the way you could feel the words as you read them aloud
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reminds me of the poets of old with such beautiful language. well written
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I loved how if flowed so well.
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Flows well and never loses sight of the theme. Well done!
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Encaptured the rapture of the sea
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Very well written, I love the story line and the flow is good!
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Wonderful . I must agree with Toccata : the best poem I've read today
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As i was reading this i was wanting to listen to a sea shell to get me in the moment. Nicely thought out and well written!
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love it
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Painfully touching.
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I enjoy. Keep up the good work
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Like one written by the Masters...
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Enjoyed reading it.
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It is a good poem.Keep it up.
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Best poem I've read so far today! Krrp up the good work! :)
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nice
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i like that
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