Cravings
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To feel you just once, touch me so I will know how you feel. To touch the warmth of my body, a hot like feeling the color red appealing. Your eyes the way they look at me, they drive me wild but, tame me like an animal that is going insane.
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Out of control feelings for a different kind of love.
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Poetry.com 3.4 out of 5 based on 5 votes.
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Well weritten, great flow of words and emotions well captured.
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I would have given it five stars if it was longer.It feels like that part is just a start up for something.But good job and keep writing!
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Great job with this Shelly. Few words can provide so much meaning. I enjoyed reading this.
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A wild animal becomes a domesticated pet and I suppose that can happen to humans too.
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short but not bad
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