TEARDROPS
Teardrops on my pillow let you know I care
When you exhale I want to breath the air
Want to be beside you every single day
Hold you in my arms never let you slip away
I want to hold you but your nowhere in sight
I had to take my chances do what I thought was right
NowI'm all alone and I'm feeling sad inside
I am broken hearted from all the tears I cried
I miss your carress I miss your gentle smile
Everything in my life you made it seem worthwhile
I missing you today I'll be missing you tomorrow
I can't take the pain can't take this guilt and sorrow
I really do l;ove you with every beat of my heart
You know it tears my world into to always be apart
My door is always open come on step right in
My love I have for you I know will never end
When you exhale I want to breath the air
Want to be beside you every single day
Hold you in my arms never let you slip away
I want to hold you but your nowhere in sight
I had to take my chances do what I thought was right
NowI'm all alone and I'm feeling sad inside
I am broken hearted from all the tears I cried
I miss your carress I miss your gentle smile
Everything in my life you made it seem worthwhile
I missing you today I'll be missing you tomorrow
I can't take the pain can't take this guilt and sorrow
I really do l;ove you with every beat of my heart
You know it tears my world into to always be apart
My door is always open come on step right in
My love I have for you I know will never end
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Poetry.com 3.5 out of 5 based on 4 votes.
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I was very moved by this poem. I like the way it flows from the first line into the rest of the poem. Not sure if that was intentional, but it works.
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i can really relate to this piece.
good emotion brought out in it
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filled with sentiment well written
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This piece had potential until the reader starts stumbling over missing letters in contractions, wordsstucktogether, misspelling, lost commas and that thing (;) between l_ ove.
and the missing period at the "end."
p.s. Someone reviewed "well written?"
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