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Feast - Haiku

Clever fox follwed
the footsteps of a lion
extensive meal found
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Poetry.com 4.7 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 37 reviews.
Omair Mohammed More than 1 year ago
nice,i love it
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Ok baba....
Divya Hirani More than 1 year ago
Nice one
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Thx much
Rimjhim Tyagi More than 1 year ago
Awesome haiku
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Thx ...Rimjhim
Sheri Moroe More than 1 year ago
Well written, clever and creative.
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Thx much
Felicia Bue More than 1 year ago
Great haiku. Nature at it's finest. And, the story is there in such simplest of lines.
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Thanks so much....Felicia
Becca Wedge More than 1 year ago
Haiku's seem easy to most.. simple format, difficult to execute properly. you've done it here :] very nice
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Thx much
Angela Neon Garcia More than 1 year ago
The lion leads them to the promised land. Good
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Thank u so much........ Angela
Jyrone Denny More than 1 year ago
You have a way with words; excellent haiku. I write them myself; check them out when you have time.
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Thanks ...Jyrone ..for sure I will
Yair Harris More than 1 year ago
Or is it done intentionally? (Editing won't erase any of the comments and can be easily done through your page)
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Thx much
Girl Next More than 1 year ago
Foxy feast for the mind :)
Tjkoeryo Darren More than 1 year ago
Love it.
doina More than 1 year ago
very nice written
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Thanks much ...once again.
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
I appreciate your reviews.
Julia W More than 1 year ago
Loving the political implications haha...great haiku.
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Thx much
Jasmine Sharma More than 1 year ago
Well done Asim...
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Thx much
Monica Harley More than 1 year ago
I love this haiku.
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Thank u so much ...Monica
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
love it
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Thanks ...Gabi
Suzzies Suzanne More than 1 year ago
In few words a whole novel is described. Love it.
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Thx much
Nick Adegwe-Oshomah More than 1 year ago
Great haiku. Factual and meaningful. Well executed
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Thx much
Divya Nishant Ranote More than 1 year ago
u r great at haiku
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Thanks again...Divya...Just learning this art.....
John Coates More than 1 year ago
There is always a simpler way to accomplish arduous tasks.
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Thx much
Naushaba Perveen Khan More than 1 year ago
IT MIGHT BE DANGEROUS ONE SHOULD HAVE ONE'S OWN WAY.
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Thx much
Faheem Jawaid More than 1 year ago
Interesting and good to read.
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Thx much
Anonymous More than 1 year ago
Oh, I LOVE a good Haiku! This is just darling, quite expressive and the fox is made so endearing.
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Thanks ......Any.
Caroline Brown More than 1 year ago
So meany meanings can come from this - which is why it's so good! Like an Aesop's Fable
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Thx much
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