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Wasteful Encounters Spent

If I etched these eliminates in so much
that they would abscond with your amnesties,
I would never more need numbing reminders
to fill the frequents of my misering in musings.

You not necessary ever in overplayed overtones,
A melody so memorable, yet unessentially uncouth,
incanting my opals of catastrophes laid on lenses,
In veils of venomocity they tryingly tear from their curtains.

And you there tall and triumphing so effortlessly endued
with muppetry you placed and played on my existence. 
And me not questing for qualms favoured from you
or your ilk inclined to impress on my sordidly soured soul. 
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Jessie Ní Leacaí More than 1 year ago
A poem about constantly trying and getting nothing in return but more pain, hurt, sorrow and the want to give up
Poetry.com 3.8 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 10 reviews.
Samuel Abenes More than 1 year ago
Awesome you got...
Jyrone Denny More than 1 year ago
Excellent poem; well written and very poetic. Unlike some people, I love your use of words. I look forward to reading more of your work; thanks for sharing!
Jessie Ní Leacaí More than 1 year ago
Thank you, much appreciated. I have 14 pages of poetry on here if you would like to browse through them. I think people get the wrong impression when they should divulge more into the meaning. I do not like to use simple vocabulary when that is not what I write with pen to paper first.
Iliyan Yurukov More than 1 year ago
Grants pleasure and elements! Colors as буд the gold! It is gentle, fine and harmonous! Good мыслею it is full Gallery!
Jessie Ní Leacaí More than 1 year ago
Thank you for your review. Much appreciated
Sarah More than 1 year ago
I love your use of descriptive words
Jessie Ní Leacaí More than 1 year ago
Thank you. Some do not appreciate the vocabulary but these are the words I chose.
SCOTT More than 1 year ago
I feel the message is lost with the overuse of not well known words. Comes off as trying to hard to sound important and can be skewed as arrogant. Try and keep it simpler to let the message come out and speak for itself
Jessie Ní Leacaí More than 1 year ago
Again i have a broad vocabulary. The words used are for alliteration purposes and to exemplify my torment. I am not going to dumb down poetry for anyone. Dictionaries are free online and education never hurt anyone but thank you for your review
Jessie Ní Leacaí More than 1 year ago
Also, the arrogance implied is apparent due is placed due my feeling of arrogant behaviour by the subject of the poem. ie, their actions were arrogant.
Daniel Alasdair Mclachlan Gauld More than 1 year ago
scott, your feeble assumptions exemplify your ignorance of intuition,empathy,emotion & any true feeling guided word choosing..........if jessie is arrogrant, she has earned her arrogance by genuine poetry that she shares, & by so many people misunderstanding her writing
Ponsenby Smithe III More than 1 year ago
Stunning looks, cutting words and a voice enamoured of an age-you have it all!
Jessie Ní Leacaí More than 1 year ago
thank you
Jonathon Nicholas Escoe More than 1 year ago
You are a very intelligent person with an intricate vocabulary. Well done.
Tammy L DuCharme More than 1 year ago
Good read, thanks for sharing!
Vinod Passy More than 1 year ago
Sorry the poem is too complicated to understand
Jessie Ní Leacaí More than 1 year ago
Fair enough, I have a broad vocabulary and some people don't. Thanks for your review
Daniel Alasdair Mclachlan Gauld More than 1 year ago
dullards dull
Louisa yiew More than 1 year ago
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