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Deeds we shall carry

Life is so temporary
all enjoyment
and sorrow
will finish one day.

The only thing
which will remain
and will go with us 
is our deeds.


Deeds on how we acted
during the times
of prosperity
and in adversity.         

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Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
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Poetry.com 4.6 out of 5 based on 29 votes.
Ofuonyebi 'Dinobi 3 months ago
well done...........
Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 9 months ago
Nice concept............well done............
Zonya Morris More than 1 year ago
Simple words, but very meaningful.
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Thx much
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Nice comments
TAMIKA JONES More than 1 year ago
U SPEAK WORDS OF WISDOM THERE ..........U DID AH GREAT JOB WITH THIS POEM
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Thx much
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Nice comments
Ryliam Southae More than 1 year ago
Good to read simple yet meaningful poems.
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Thx much
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Nice comments
Duelo Sayango More than 1 year ago
Very true.
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Thx much
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Thx much
Faheem Jawaid More than 1 year ago
True very true.
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Thx much
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Nice comments
Naushaba Perveen Khan More than 1 year ago
TIME AND LIFE ARE NOT THE SAME FOAM ON SEASHORE AND THE FAME ARE THE SAME TIME KEEPS ON PASSING LIFE ENDS WITH ITS PHASES AND DEEDS , GOOD OR BAD ARE ALWAYS RECALLED
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Thx and excellent comment.
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Nice comments
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
I appreciate your comments.
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Nice comments
Angela Neon Garcia More than 1 year ago
Perfect ideas
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Thanks Angela
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Nice comments
henra z More than 1 year ago
Excellent work!!
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Thanks much....Henra
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Nice comments
Maila Malik More than 1 year ago
Really impressive work, and inspirational! Excellent!
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Thanks a lot...Maila
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Nice comments
Devi More than 1 year ago
love it
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Thanks a lot........Devi
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Nice comments
doina More than 1 year ago
Wonderful
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Thanks a lot....Doina
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Nice comments
SUzan More than 1 year ago
Nicely put on.....Asim
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Thanks ...SUzan
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Nice comments
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
well done
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Thx ...Gabi
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Nice comments
Dema Ya'rub More than 1 year ago
I completely agree.
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Thanks a lot.....Dema
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Nice comments
Divya Nishant Ranote More than 1 year ago
nice
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Thanks a lot...Divya
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Nice comments
Celeste Melendez More than 1 year ago
Simple but full of depth and meaning. Very nice!
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Thx much
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Nice comments
Randy Ramos More than 1 year ago
I like to think that life is like a pebble in a pond, concentric circles that either dissipate or lap upon the shores of time. Nicely done here. Thanks for sharing.
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Thx much
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Nice comments
Cynthia Frederick More than 1 year ago
Keep writing
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Nice comments
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Thx much
Taoufik El Mhassani More than 1 year ago
though your poem looks short but the diction is quite rich. enjoyed it
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Thx much
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Nice comments
Timothy Low More than 1 year ago
it is good to read such a poem
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Thx much
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Nice comments
vibhuti sahu More than 1 year ago
life is not temporary life is about making it permanent in others mind by our deeds........ nice job:D
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Thx much
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Nice comments
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Nice comments
Nick Adegwe-Oshomah More than 1 year ago
Deeds are the barometer for measuring human existence
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Thx much
Asim Nehal More than 1 year ago
Nice comments
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