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Who Decides Me or You

Who decides the culture
What's important Why
Does the character ever change
Wherever we go
We take ourselves...
Can't we create the beauty too...
Or must the work be within
Spend a lifetimer on
Secular achievment and gain
Why are so many deceived
Why are so many deceived
When they never enjoy
the true meaning of life
The child...the poet...
But the white shoe man
Sees the trudgeryof his time loss
And he thought he was successful...
And he thought he was successful. 
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Poetry.com 3.5 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 6 reviews.
Raney Diamond More than 1 year ago
Love it! thanks for sharing
Ofuonyebi 'Dinobi More than 1 year ago
good write...well done
Coy Day 11 months ago
Jean Mompremier More than 1 year ago
i guess i could not grasp the heart of the poem. is it the triumph of individuality against social pressure or is more of a anti-political statement?
M P More than 1 year ago
I just don't get it. Sorry!
Richard Milton 11 months ago
very good
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