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Every Second Wouldn't Be The Same Without Her

Every second i think of her...
She's the only girl left on earth.
My love for her is in depth,
I slept with her on my mind, 
 
Kiss her as i hold her tight,
Treat her like she wants to be treated,
Everything i meant, would have her speechless. 
I would show my true feelings and inner thoughts.
 
I would show her I am a winner, and not one who lost. 
Tell her how much it would mean,  to raise a child, 
And tell her I'll be here,  as we age even older.
Every second wouldn't be the same without her.
 
 
 

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Jon Otano More than 1 year ago
This poem is about true love till the end!!! :)
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Yvonne's Poetry More than 1 year ago
throughly enjoyed....beautiful piece
Gabriel Mican More than 1 year ago
well done
Jon Otano More than 1 year ago
Thanks Gabriel for reviewing this!!! :)
Ron Chapman More than 1 year ago
Thanks for sharing your thoughts.
Jon Otano More than 1 year ago
Thanks Ron for reading this!!! :)
Maria Shaw More than 1 year ago
I love it
Jon Otano More than 1 year ago
Thank you for reading!!! :)
Ludy Bührs More than 1 year ago
well done!
Jon Otano More than 1 year ago
Thank you for reading!!! Ludy!! :)
Divya Nishant Ranote More than 1 year ago
I liked it
Jon Otano More than 1 year ago
Glad you do!!! :) Thank you for reading!!! :)
Hasmukh Mehta More than 1 year ago
lovely and good poem should not remain in mind only make her realize knowingly
Jon Otano More than 1 year ago
Thank you so much for the review!!! And your right it should not remain in mind only!!! :)
Tony Becerra More than 1 year ago
kinda sad
Jon Otano More than 1 year ago
Yeah! Sad in a good way though cause it was true love till the end!! :)
clifton redmond More than 1 year ago
lovely writing great work and experssion of emotions
Jon Otano More than 1 year ago
Thank you so much!!! :)
Ernel Merano More than 1 year ago
i like this....
India More than 1 year ago
I like it :-)
Jon Otano More than 1 year ago
Glad you do India Thank you so much for reviewing this!!! :)
Derrick G More than 1 year ago
Good.We never realize that somebody is a diamond until they are gone.
Jon Otano More than 1 year ago
Thank you!!! :)
Arunkumar Kankipati More than 1 year ago
I liked the flow of thought, but would like to see more subtlety to the expression
Jon Otano More than 1 year ago
Thank you for reading this! :)
Kevin McCall More than 1 year ago
Thats sweet!
Jon Otano More than 1 year ago
Thank you for reviewing!!! :)
Alan Green 'Guppyman' More than 1 year ago
the poet tells of a love that will last for ever
Jon Otano More than 1 year ago
Thank you for reviewing this!!! :)
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