Gold Grace
by
Tom Kennedy
Gold grace...power oh power sinning no more...
As the argument can never take over the experience
Walking way of God's triumph
Greater in you, yes just alone you
than anywhere on the planet earth...
Peace over the world as souls steadfast
On God's word...walk in God's word...
Experience something
Beyond the sunshine
The promise
Jesus has given you
Blessed in His Request
of Unconditional Love...
Now go smile at the nearest bluebird.
As the argument can never take over the experience
Walking way of God's triumph
Greater in you, yes just alone you
than anywhere on the planet earth...
Peace over the world as souls steadfast
On God's word...walk in God's word...
Experience something
Beyond the sunshine
The promise
Jesus has given you
Blessed in His Request
of Unconditional Love...
Now go smile at the nearest bluebird.
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Poetry.com 3 out of 5 based on 4 votes.
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hats off
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I like your effort
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A poem of faith and celebration one assumes. However, one can question God and Peace in the same sentence. Religion and Politics has caused more wars; than one would like to count. Perhaps we can reflect on suicide bombers all for the cause of religion....One can be forgiven as one can view from a cynics perspective and no doubt, there is always an answer to dismiss 'argument'? At least I do know one certainty; I will be forgiven, just like the bombers....
Grammatical, punctuation revision.
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sorry not for me
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