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The Great Spirit Morns Us.

Today is the day the Great Spirit made me.
It is the day I came into this great land.
The moon, my wife looks down on me full in her brilliance.
She watches me from affair and her face is sad.
I am troubled by the distance now between us as I walk this great land which the Spirit has provided.
He, the Master of all things is saddened by our inability to connect.
The heart of the Great Spirit is sad by her choice to be so high in the sky.
I share His sadness but his heart is attached to his tears and he begins to cry.
As He sheds his tears the brilliance of my woman is clouded and covered by His emotions.
The Great Spirit pours out His feelings on to this once great land.
With each raindrop that falls from His face, I feel it cold upon my body.
As the Great Spirit morns our love, I too feel His pain deep within my core, as the pain spews from my mouth.
My wife, the moon, is now gone from site and the Spirit fills the night sky with sadness.
This, on the day of my birth. 
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Poetry.com 4.4 out of 5 based on 0 ratings. 14 reviews.
Stephanie Williams 4 months ago
Simply touching.
Sweet Honey Dove 4 months ago
i could relate to this poem, thank you
5 stars for a deeply heartfelt and moving piece
please keep sharing lee :)
Nestor Pastor 9 months ago
I am sad too because this poem reminds me the day I knew that my mother died about 22  years ago.
but this one of the best touching poems I have ever seen. thanks Keep the spirit
Andreas Simic 10 months ago
There are some efforts that are a joy to read. This was one of them.
Gary Gallegos More than 1 year ago
A touchingly sensitive poem.
Atupa Mul-lure 7 months ago
beautiful poem
Amoni B 7 months ago
And sorry for your loss
Sonja Carnes More than 1 year ago
I see a beauty in its purest. Thankyou
Angelia Lawrence More than 1 year ago
I like this poem because the imagery and symbolism is Native American (I think). I do not feel qualified to critique this genre except to say I was moved.
Debra Delgado More than 1 year ago
Could almost feel the emotions myself!
Everett Lindsey More than 1 year ago
Thank you for sharing.
Jodie Coughlin More than 1 year ago
very well written.
Diksharth Dagar 30 days ago
do more work to get your poems more better
Bonzell Joins, Jr. 5 months ago
Good poem
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